The Learning Experience of Broadcast Journalism
By Justin Riray
Can San Jose State broadcast students survive their major without owning their own recording and editing equipment?
SJSU’s broadcast journalism majors learn, early on, that all serious video editing is done through Final Cut Pro. The program only works on Macs.
Students also need to use quality camcorders and good audio recording equipment. After paying for rent, tuition, a parking permit, and books, most students have no finances to spare. They will rely on renting hardware from the school.
Poor equipment availability for these students can turn a fair and enjoyable broadcast project into a nightmare.
Broadcast student Jean Walker feels that, “… there would have been enough time if the proper resources had been available.”
PC owners are usually unwilling or financially incapable of buying a Mac. They are left no other choice but to fully complete their Final Cut projects on campus.
The best place for journalism majors to edit their videos used to be open for as long as students needed it.
Broadcast professor John Shrader explained why the room is only open if a faculty member is moderating it.
The availability of the room is now limited because “… some thievery occurred and that really impacted the amount of time that was available in [the news video editing room].” said Shrader.
Besides the Update News room in Dwight Bentel Hall, which closes around 3 p.m., the university only has four other computers with FCP capability throughout the entire campus: a couple of editing stations at Clark Hall.
The lack of Macs with FCP is only one challenge for the school’s PC owners.
Equipment that students can borrow from the university are usually all out.
Walker recalls, “I went to the checkout room at least once a week during the last half of the semester trying to get a voice recorder for a photojournalism project or a camcorder for Jour 132B, and I was told every time that there was nothing available, they didn't know when things were coming back, and they didn't even bother to keep a waiting list because they didn't know when things were coming back!”
In the JMC, students do not get fined for holding borrowed items for long periods of time.
SJSU broadcast major Jacob Amaya explained, “The [Instructional Resource Center] only rents cameras and [microphones] out for a day, and I usually need it for longer than that.”
If getting possession of proper equipment isn’t enough trouble, time poses a whole different set of problems.
According to Walker, “Getting everybody's schedules to match up …” was an added challenge.
As a working student, it would be hard to coordinate schedules with possible interview subjects and getting enough time to spend editing on school desktops.
Many students’ days are full due to the combination of class and work. Sometimes the only time they have is very early in the morning or really late at night. Most interview subjects are only available during business hours.
Time constraints are worsened when there are group projects, and even more during the final month of school “… during everybody's busiest time of the semester. My other four classes also had major projects due at the same time,” Walker added.
Perhaps the one upside to this experience is getting a feel for the reality of being in the broadcast field. It teaches students that they must be very determined and well-prepared for any job they are given.
Shrader said, “If you’ve done all your preparation and you’ve worked hard to prepare yourself for the moment when the pressure gets crazy, then the whole world kind of slows down a little bit and you can work under pressure. The key is don’t think about the big picture, just think about the little picture you’re working on.”
Amaya concluded, “It’s pretty rough, but this is the only way we’re ever going to learn.”
Sidebar:
I had a lot of trouble with my final broadcast project.
I didn’t have my own camera nor do I have a Mac. My friend Anne lent me her camera, but needed it back in three days. So, I had to shoot, cut, upload, and edit my video files in that short
period of time, all while I still had class, work, and other projects.
My teammate and I shot SJSU’s 2009 Pilipino Culture Night. The show lasted four and half hours, so we were there for about six.
I called in to work that Wednesday so I could edit my files. Sadly, I didn’t have enough room on my flash drive. I had to drive all the way to Best Buy and spend $120 on a portable hard drive.
When I got back to school, the editing room was locked up for the remainder of the night. I took my gear over to Clark Hall only to find that both the editing stations were occupied and there was a two person wait. Students can use the stations for up to two hours.
I figured I would call it a day, so I went home to do other projects and study for my Mcom100w final.
The next day I had work right after class, so I went in early and found out that the fire wire I borrowed wasn’t working so I couldn’t upload any video files to FCP.
After asking around for about half an hour, I managed to have someone lend me theirs. Finally, I began to upload my interview and b-roll footage.
The next day, I spent four hours at Clark Hall writing my track and script for the news report. Before actually putting it together, I had to record my voice over track.
I completely forgot about the defective fire wire until I unsuccessfully tried to upload the audio.
I drove about 25 minutes to Anne’s house because she had Final Cut Express, a lesser version of FCP.
She uploaded my audio track onto my hard drive through her Mac. I tried to edit my piece on it, but since my project was saved as a FCP file, her FPE couldn’t open it.
Well, at least I was set, all I had to do was to put everything together the next night.
At Clark Hall again … the students who worked the facility joked that I should just live there. I didn’t laugh. It seemed like a great idea.
When I attempted to combine my original FCP project with the audio FCE that Anne uploaded for me, it wouldn’t work. I figured, since FCP is the higher version, then I should surely be able to load FPE files with it.
I checked the forums. I was wrong. The files were completely incompatible. So, not only do I have to have a Mac and Final Cut, but the two versions didn’t even correlate. This became more and more of a disaster.
Anne had to drive the tape down to me so I could re-upload it.
It only took me an hours and a half to actually piece the footage together for my news package, less than a quarter of the time I took filming and organizing my files.
I came to Clark hall at 8 a.m. the next day to add the finishing touches. Lastly, I was required to add in the Update News lower-thirds. Clark Hall computers didn’t have it.
Pressed for time due to having work at 11 a.m., I ran to Dwight Bentel Hall to get into the update news editing room to grab hold of the Update lower-third.
It was locked. I ran through the whole building looking for someone to open it. Finally, Lilly Buchwitz had a key. I borrowed it and ran back to the room only to find out that her key opens up the first room, but not the second room that had the Macs.
Right before I began to cry, I looked around the primary room and saw that there was a lone Mac sitting in the corner. Sure enough, it had FCP and the lower-third effect I needed.
Fifteen minutes later, I was finished and pleased with my project.
I realized that, if I were as rich and tech-savvy as I were hard-working than I would be an elite broadcast student.
Unfortunately, not being able to afford my own hardware and software exponentially increased the time and effort I should have spent on this project.
Though I am very relieved I am through and created a great newscast, I am very infuriated on how difficult it is to be restrained by lack of finances in the school of broadcast journalism.
Broadcast Woes
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CAN SAN JOSE STATE BROADCAST STUDENTS SURVIVE THEIR MAJOR WITHOUT OWNING THEIR OWN RECORDING AND EDITING EQUIPMENT?
SINCE ALL EDITING MUST BE DONE THROUGH FINAL CUT PRO, WHICH IS ONLY FOR MACS, PC USERS ARE POSED WITH A DILEMMA.
BROADCAST STUDENT JEAN WALKER FELT THAT TEACHERS ALLOW STUDENTS ENOUGH TIME TO COMPLETE VIDEO PROJECTS, BUT THE PROPER RESOURCES AREN’T EASILY AVAILABLE.
THERE ARE ONLY TWO PLACES ON CAMPUS THAT OFFER MACS WITH FINAL CUT PRO FOR STUDENTS.
THE MAIN ROOM IS THE UPDATE NEWS ROOM WHICH HAS RECENTLY HAD VALUABLE ITEMS GONE MISSING.
NOW INSTEAD OF THE ROOM BEING OPEN UNTIL STUDENTS NEEDED IT, IT NOW CLOSES WHEN THE FACULTY LEAVES.
CLARK HALL HAS FOUR EDITING COMPUTER STATIONS THAT ARE NORMALLY OCCUPIED.
THE NUMBER OF RENTABLE CAMERAS AND OTHER RECORDING GEAR ARE ALSO VERY LIMITED.
SJSU BROADCAST PROFESSOR JOHN SHRADER MADE LIGHT OF THE SITUATION.
BY HAVING TO FINISH A BROADCAST PROJECT UNDER PRESSURE, STUDENTS MUST LEARN HOW TO DEAL WITH TIME CONSTRAINTS AND OTHER OBSTACLES.
STUDENT JACOB AMAYA AGREED, IT’S PRETTY ROUGH, BUT THIS IS THE ONLY WAY WE’RE EVERY GOING TO LEARN.
FROM SAN JOSE, JUSTIN RIRAY, UPDATE NEWS.
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Monday, May 18, 2009
Final Jour61 Broadcast
Saturday, May 16, 2009
Thursday, May 7, 2009
Online News Writing Exercise 1: Mercury News
Online News Writing Exercise 1
I am surveying the Mercury’s website.
a) Do the news items reflect immediacy?
They do for the most part. The stories on the homepage are up to date. There is one about a wildfire going on in Santa Barbara and of course a couple pieces on the upcoming Star Trek movie. Sadly, the latter may actually be a top news story at the moment.
b) Does the site try to help readers save time?
The sections are all immediately available at the top of the page as well as many direct links to top stories throughout the rest of the page. This would be very convenient for readers to find what they want to read about even with a limited amount of time.
c) Is it quick and easy to get information?
Yes, I explained it in the previous answer.
d) Does it provide both visual and verbal information?
I believe it is slightly lacking with the visuals, but the ratio between text and illustration on the website is about the same as the actual newspaper, except they shrink the photos for the web.
e) Do the stories contain lists and bullets to make them easier to scan?
Yes. Under the lead story and the other two or three main stories there are sub-sections for the links to the top stories of every news section in the paper. The coolest part about the homepage is the box on the right side that has the top five most viewed stories in the past 12 hours. I think it is a great way for people who aren’t looking for a particular subject to find news that matters.
f) Are the stories broken into "chunks"?
Yes. I checked three stories and none of them have more than a two sentence paragraph. They is a paragraph break after each chunk, and not a single paragraph ran over four lines.
g) Do stories provide hyperlinks to additional information?
Yup. There are occasional in-text links to other sites or past articles, but most of the related links appear in the sidebar or at the end of the article.
h) Are there opportunities for readers to "talk back"?
They have a contact section, but I did not find an obviously available link to reader response.
i) Does the site use multimedia to enhance understanding and add appeal?
Honestly, the site is quite primitive compared to other websites. But I have heard many Mercury News guest speakers and I believe that they are very conservative toward using the internet as their main communication vehicle, so I am not surprised.
I am surveying the Mercury’s website.
a) Do the news items reflect immediacy?
They do for the most part. The stories on the homepage are up to date. There is one about a wildfire going on in Santa Barbara and of course a couple pieces on the upcoming Star Trek movie. Sadly, the latter may actually be a top news story at the moment.
b) Does the site try to help readers save time?
The sections are all immediately available at the top of the page as well as many direct links to top stories throughout the rest of the page. This would be very convenient for readers to find what they want to read about even with a limited amount of time.
c) Is it quick and easy to get information?
Yes, I explained it in the previous answer.
d) Does it provide both visual and verbal information?
I believe it is slightly lacking with the visuals, but the ratio between text and illustration on the website is about the same as the actual newspaper, except they shrink the photos for the web.
e) Do the stories contain lists and bullets to make them easier to scan?
Yes. Under the lead story and the other two or three main stories there are sub-sections for the links to the top stories of every news section in the paper. The coolest part about the homepage is the box on the right side that has the top five most viewed stories in the past 12 hours. I think it is a great way for people who aren’t looking for a particular subject to find news that matters.
f) Are the stories broken into "chunks"?
Yes. I checked three stories and none of them have more than a two sentence paragraph. They is a paragraph break after each chunk, and not a single paragraph ran over four lines.
g) Do stories provide hyperlinks to additional information?
Yup. There are occasional in-text links to other sites or past articles, but most of the related links appear in the sidebar or at the end of the article.
h) Are there opportunities for readers to "talk back"?
They have a contact section, but I did not find an obviously available link to reader response.
i) Does the site use multimedia to enhance understanding and add appeal?
Honestly, the site is quite primitive compared to other websites. But I have heard many Mercury News guest speakers and I believe that they are very conservative toward using the internet as their main communication vehicle, so I am not surprised.
Topical Blog Post #3: 100w Fish out of Water
Purple Shirted Soulful Singers and Smiling Strangers
by Justin Riray
by Justin Riray
Being a tall skinny Asian guy in the middle of a building full of black people, I felt slightly awkward.
I attended the Sunday service of a black Baptist church, Emmanuel Baptist Church in north San Jose this weekend.
My homework assignment for one of my classes was called “Fish out of Water,“ in which I would have to put myself in a situation where I would feel uncomfortable. To get the most out of the experience, I decided to sit in the front-middle section of the church.
The church had the usual service layout. They sang songs, prayed, collected money, and had a speaker deliver a message about how to incorporate God into our everyday lives.
Though, the flavor of the entire mass was full of warmth and soul.
I wasn’t nervous at all, until I parked my car and saw that I was most likely the only non-black person there. Though, there were a couple Latino people in attendance.
I could feel everyone staring at me. It wasn’t in a bad way, but in a curious way, like, “Is that kid lost?”
It’s funny that, the night before as I was planning my outfit for church, I thought to myself, “Hmm, I think I’ll wear purple. That is a good color for a Sunday mass at a Baptist church.”
I thought myself a bit prejudiced, but to my surprise the entire choir was wearing purple.
The choir and band combination was brilliant. I haven’t heard such uplifting music in a long time.
There were kids younger than me who sang like angels with more soul than I thought God could fit in one building.
One boy, who looked no older than 19, led the choir in an amazing piece of music. When his solo came on, he could hit notes Beyonce would sing, and did it with ease and spirit.
Despite being a different race, at least we shared somewhat of the same beliefs and morals.
They must have been happy to see me come to their church. Most churches love seeing newcomers attend their services and gatherings.
At one point in the middle of the ceremony, a reverend asked all the visitors to stand up as the church welcomed them. Before I stood up, most of the people were already looking at me.
It felt great as I looked around and saw tons of smiling faces. They were real smiles, not the forced kind.
They even had a portion of the service where everyone got to get up and greet one another. A bunch of very nice people gave me a great handshake, a welcoming smile, and thanked me for coming to their church.
Although it looked like I was completely out of place, by the end of church, I felt very much a part of them.
As I walked out, passed peopled talking and hugging, I thought to myself, “How could there be such an exciting church and why was I raised in a boring church? No fair.”
My “Fish out of Water” assignment turned out to be nothing of that sort. I guess God is full of surprises, people just need to be open to them.
Saturday, May 2, 2009
Topical Blog Post #2 - Dai Sugano, Photojournalist
Dai Sugano: Passionate about Pictures
By Justin Riray
When a person has a hobby that they are passionate about, they will end up doing it until four or five in the morning.
“Editing until 4 a.m., you’re in that mode--like writing a love letter to your girlfriend. You might wake up in the morning and think, ‘Oh s**t! I wrote that!?’ It’s crazy like that.” -Dai Sugano
For the San Jose State Vis-Com day, Dai Sugano, a photo journalist with the San Jose Mercury News spoke to students about how he turned his passion into a career.
In DBH 133 at 10 a.m. on April 23rd, Sugano spoke about his journey as a photographer and gave students the privilege of watching his photo and video slideshows as he provided behind-the-scenes commentary.
He began as a street photographer, someone who uses a still shot camera to capture people, places, and things in their usual element. He made mundane scenes into beautiful pictures. Of these photos were a dog with his tongue out, a person walking out into the light from a dark alley, and a woman in a red dress, walking on the sidewalk. His ability to make aesthetics out of buildings and streets is amazing.
He explained that the reason many people yield from trying their passion as a professional job is because they are used to just being on their own and having no one to criticize them.
Sugano made the entire room nod in realization and laugh at the same time when he said, “We feel… we don’t want to suck.”
Sugano added, “You are doing it because you like to do it. It is the key to success.”
By Justin Riray
When a person has a hobby that they are passionate about, they will end up doing it until four or five in the morning.
“Editing until 4 a.m., you’re in that mode--like writing a love letter to your girlfriend. You might wake up in the morning and think, ‘Oh s**t! I wrote that!?’ It’s crazy like that.” -Dai Sugano
For the San Jose State Vis-Com day, Dai Sugano, a photo journalist with the San Jose Mercury News spoke to students about how he turned his passion into a career.
In DBH 133 at 10 a.m. on April 23rd, Sugano spoke about his journey as a photographer and gave students the privilege of watching his photo and video slideshows as he provided behind-the-scenes commentary.
He began as a street photographer, someone who uses a still shot camera to capture people, places, and things in their usual element. He made mundane scenes into beautiful pictures. Of these photos were a dog with his tongue out, a person walking out into the light from a dark alley, and a woman in a red dress, walking on the sidewalk. His ability to make aesthetics out of buildings and streets is amazing.
He explained that the reason many people yield from trying their passion as a professional job is because they are used to just being on their own and having no one to criticize them.
Sugano made the entire room nod in realization and laugh at the same time when he said, “We feel… we don’t want to suck.”
Sugano added, “You are doing it because you like to do it. It is the key to success.”
Focus Story Structure
Football Injury leaves a 16-year-old Wheelchair-bound
His team is lined-up and ready for their opponents to move. His focus is narrowed as he watches the ball is thrown to the enemy receiver. Like a bullet, he makes a b-line straight toward the ball carrier. He can feel the rush of the tackle he is about to make. It’s going to be a perfect hit!
Pete Stenhoff, 16, a junior at Chula Vista High School in Redmond, Calif., is stuck in a wheelchair. As he rammed his head into the ball carrier’s chest, he cracked vertebrae in his spine. He could not graduate with his class because of the injury.
There are 20,000 injuries in high school football each year -- 12 percent of them permanently disabling the victims. Thirteen youths died last year. Thirty-five percent of the injuries are to the neck or head. Most critics blame the helmet.
Note:
My focus is on youth football injuries. I used Stenhoff's anecdote as the hook for my lead.
The second paragraph of the exercise stated, “Pete Stenhoff, 16, a junior at Chula Vista High School in Redmond, Calif., was hurt in a game during his senior year.”
How is he a junior, but was hurt in his senior year. Just pointing out that the would be impossible, unless he was demoted a grade. Weird.
His team is lined-up and ready for their opponents to move. His focus is narrowed as he watches the ball is thrown to the enemy receiver. Like a bullet, he makes a b-line straight toward the ball carrier. He can feel the rush of the tackle he is about to make. It’s going to be a perfect hit!
Pete Stenhoff, 16, a junior at Chula Vista High School in Redmond, Calif., is stuck in a wheelchair. As he rammed his head into the ball carrier’s chest, he cracked vertebrae in his spine. He could not graduate with his class because of the injury.
There are 20,000 injuries in high school football each year -- 12 percent of them permanently disabling the victims. Thirteen youths died last year. Thirty-five percent of the injuries are to the neck or head. Most critics blame the helmet.
Note:
My focus is on youth football injuries. I used Stenhoff's anecdote as the hook for my lead.
The second paragraph of the exercise stated, “Pete Stenhoff, 16, a junior at Chula Vista High School in Redmond, Calif., was hurt in a game during his senior year.”
How is he a junior, but was hurt in his senior year. Just pointing out that the would be impossible, unless he was demoted a grade. Weird.
Find that Feature Lead: Spring 2009 Access mag.
These leads were taken from SJSU’s spring 2009, Access magazine.
1 . “The End is Near” by Jasmine Duarte
In the 21st century, people live their lives day by day, not really thinking about what they want to do in the next year or even next week. But what if you knew the world was ending in four years? What if a thousand years ago, an ancient civilization predicted that the end of the world was coming? That day, “doomsday,” may be coming closer and soon it will be December 21, 2012, or as the Maya know it: The end of the world.
This is a direct address, startling statement lead. The writer is using second-person to speak to the reader directly. The statements made, about how the end of the world might not be so far in time, are quite startling.
2. “Eighth story sunset” by Justin Perry
Silence, or close to it. Gentle sounds counterpoint the subtle drone of air conditioning and the insect-like buzz of fluorescent light fixture that needs replacing. Gently rustling pages, a dropped pen, chair legs dragged across carpet, a muted cough, a gliding zipper, all punctuated by the soft chime of the elevator arriving at its destination. The monotonous hum of the downtown streets below is muffled by the eight-story distance and the great curtain of double-paned glass
This is clearly a scene-setter lead. The entire paragraph is a detailed description of the environment from the use of sound and sight.
1 . “The End is Near” by Jasmine Duarte
In the 21st century, people live their lives day by day, not really thinking about what they want to do in the next year or even next week. But what if you knew the world was ending in four years? What if a thousand years ago, an ancient civilization predicted that the end of the world was coming? That day, “doomsday,” may be coming closer and soon it will be December 21, 2012, or as the Maya know it: The end of the world.
This is a direct address, startling statement lead. The writer is using second-person to speak to the reader directly. The statements made, about how the end of the world might not be so far in time, are quite startling.
2. “Eighth story sunset” by Justin Perry
Silence, or close to it. Gentle sounds counterpoint the subtle drone of air conditioning and the insect-like buzz of fluorescent light fixture that needs replacing. Gently rustling pages, a dropped pen, chair legs dragged across carpet, a muted cough, a gliding zipper, all punctuated by the soft chime of the elevator arriving at its destination. The monotonous hum of the downtown streets below is muffled by the eight-story distance and the great curtain of double-paned glass
This is clearly a scene-setter lead. The entire paragraph is a detailed description of the environment from the use of sound and sight.
Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Revised: Topical Blog Post #1 - Twitter
News at Your Fingertips
By now, everyone either loves or hates Twitter. This mass “microblogging” has become a household name in modern communications.
“Kansas City Star” writer Laura Bauer wrote that “more people flock to Twitter as a conduit for information.” What started as another evolution of texting or instant messaging has became somewhat of a personal wire service.
Twitter allows for normal people to document their every moment and let all of their followers know what is going on in their lives. Bauer said Twitter is “about real information, in real time.”
Twitter can be used by companies, organizations, public officials, and even celebrities to broadcast the latest news to the public.
We have seen the Obama election campaign use Youtube as a guerrilla marketing form of communication. It most likely helped win over the younger generation of voters who seem to live off of the internet.
Now police departments or schools can warn the local community about immediate danger. Companies can issue mini press releases to inform their stockholders of sudden changes or important events.
We have seen information be spread by mail, radio, television, phone, internet, and now the time it takes to receive news has been cut to a few seconds. If it hasn’t already, Twitter, and other microblogging programs will revolutionize the way information is communicated.
By now, everyone either loves or hates Twitter. This mass “microblogging” has become a household name in modern communications.
“Kansas City Star” writer Laura Bauer wrote that “more people flock to Twitter as a conduit for information.” What started as another evolution of texting or instant messaging has became somewhat of a personal wire service.
Twitter allows for normal people to document their every moment and let all of their followers know what is going on in their lives. Bauer said Twitter is “about real information, in real time.”
Twitter can be used by companies, organizations, public officials, and even celebrities to broadcast the latest news to the public.
We have seen the Obama election campaign use Youtube as a guerrilla marketing form of communication. It most likely helped win over the younger generation of voters who seem to live off of the internet.
Now police departments or schools can warn the local community about immediate danger. Companies can issue mini press releases to inform their stockholders of sudden changes or important events.
We have seen information be spread by mail, radio, television, phone, internet, and now the time it takes to receive news has been cut to a few seconds. If it hasn’t already, Twitter, and other microblogging programs will revolutionize the way information is communicated.
Favorite Magazine: Game Informer
Men’s most favorite magazine isn’t Playboy.
Game Informer magazine combines video game knowledge with humor, two things that people loved since they were kids.
It is interesting that they target gamers, considering that they come in all ages, races, and social classes. Guys and girls can both be into video games. They are fun, interactive, and can be played solo or with friends, and now even cooperatively or competitively online.
The writers of Game Informer focus on two things, how games can be enjoyed and how players can up their skills. They know that there are the gamers that play to have fun and the ones that play to win.
Their blunt, know-it-all, and sometimes satirical delivery of reviews, previews and help guides make sure that anyone can find useful information and entertainment in their magazine.
Their writing style is conversational. They don’t use a lot of big words, except for the terminology that only players would know. They sneak innuendos and references to older, classic games that make readers feel like they are part of a whole separate culture of gamers. The fact that the readers can understand these references creates a more comfortable and personal feel to the magazine.
Still, the only downside to focusing on the gaming industry is that the majority of non-gamers won’t even pick up an issue because it is completely irrelevant to their lives. But, for gamers all over the world, Game Informer will always be their source of information and entertainment.
Game Informer magazine combines video game knowledge with humor, two things that people loved since they were kids.
It is interesting that they target gamers, considering that they come in all ages, races, and social classes. Guys and girls can both be into video games. They are fun, interactive, and can be played solo or with friends, and now even cooperatively or competitively online.
The writers of Game Informer focus on two things, how games can be enjoyed and how players can up their skills. They know that there are the gamers that play to have fun and the ones that play to win.
Their blunt, know-it-all, and sometimes satirical delivery of reviews, previews and help guides make sure that anyone can find useful information and entertainment in their magazine.
Their writing style is conversational. They don’t use a lot of big words, except for the terminology that only players would know. They sneak innuendos and references to older, classic games that make readers feel like they are part of a whole separate culture of gamers. The fact that the readers can understand these references creates a more comfortable and personal feel to the magazine.
Still, the only downside to focusing on the gaming industry is that the majority of non-gamers won’t even pick up an issue because it is completely irrelevant to their lives. But, for gamers all over the world, Game Informer will always be their source of information and entertainment.
Saturday, April 18, 2009
Slightly Revised - Final Broadcast Project
Video Link
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ARE COLLEGE STUDENTS IN AMERICA GETTING A PROPER EDUCATION?
EDUCATIONAL PSYCHOLOGIST ROXANA MARACHI SAYS AMERICAN COLLEGE SYSTEMS FAIL TO MOTIVATE STUDENTS TO PERFORM TO THEIR FULL POTENTIAL.
MARACHI HOSTED A WORKSHOP FOR FELLOW EDUCATORS ON MARCH THIRD AT SAN JOSE STATE ON HOW TO BETTER MOTIVATE STUDENTS.
THE U-S COLLEGE SYSTEM IS BASED ON GRADES AS STUDENTS ARE REWARDED AND VALUED BY RANK.
STUDIES SHOW THAT THIS ACTUALLY DECREASES STUDENTS’ MOTIVATION AND EAGERNESS TO LEARN.
MARACHI SAYS THAT GRADES BECOME THE GOAL INSTEAD OF THE LEARNING.
ALTHOUGH THE ACADEMIC RANKING SYSTEM WORKS TEMPORARILY, IT LOWERS STUDENTS’ WORK ETHIC IN THE LONG RUN.
S-J-S-U E-CAMPUS ADMINISTRATOR, MARK ADAMS SAYS THAT THE TOP PERFORMERS IN THEIR FIELD ENJOYED SPENDING AN ENORMOUS AMOUNT OF TIME IN PRACTICE.
HUMAN RESOURCES MANAGER, DENNIS HUNG-GRIJ, SAYS THAT THE CULTURAL VALUE OF THE U-S WAS FOUNDED ON HARD WORK, WHILE THE REST OF THE WORLD FOCUSED ON ACTUAL EDUCATION.
CHINA AN INDIA HAVE MUCH HIGHER COLLEGE GRADUATION RATES THAN THE U-S.
EDUCATIONAL SPECIALISTS LIKE MARACHI CONTINUE TO FIND OUT BETTER WAYS TO MOTIVATE STUDENTS AND RAISE LEARNING CAPABILITIES.
MARACHI ADVISED THAT STUDENTS NEED TO LEARN FOR THE SAKE OF LEARNING AND USE THE TOOLS AND KNOWLEDGE OFFERED BY THEIR EDUCATORS.
Tuesday, April 7, 2009
Revised - Broadcast Shwarzenegger Story
Govenator’s Bear
25 seconds
STARTING TODAY, VISITORS TO THE CAPITOL WILL FIND A BRONZE STATUE OF A GRIZZLY BEAR IN THE HALLWAY OUTSIDE GOVERNOR SCHWARZENEGGER (SH-WAR-ZEN-A-GUR’S) OFFICE.
GOVERNOR SCHWARZENEGGER (SH-WAR-ZEN-A-GUR) BOUGHT THE STATUE WITH HIS OWN MONEY FROM AN ART GALLERY IN ASPEN, COLORADO, WHERE HE HAD STOPPED ON A FUND-RAISING SWING.
HIS SPOKESMAN, AARON MCLEAR SAID THAT THE GOVERNOR THOUGHT THAT SCHOOL CHILDREN WHO TOUR THE CAPITOL WOULD ENJOY TAKING PICTURES WITH THE BEAR.
THE STATUE, BY ARTIST STEVEN BENNETT, IS THE SAME TYPE OF BEAR THAT DECORATES THE CALIFORNIA STATE FLAG.
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Note: I was taught in my broadcasting class with Shrader, to spell out the pronunciation of awkwardly spelled names, even if they are well known.
25 seconds
STARTING TODAY, VISITORS TO THE CAPITOL WILL FIND A BRONZE STATUE OF A GRIZZLY BEAR IN THE HALLWAY OUTSIDE GOVERNOR SCHWARZENEGGER (SH-WAR-ZEN-A-GUR’S) OFFICE.
GOVERNOR SCHWARZENEGGER (SH-WAR-ZEN-A-GUR) BOUGHT THE STATUE WITH HIS OWN MONEY FROM AN ART GALLERY IN ASPEN, COLORADO, WHERE HE HAD STOPPED ON A FUND-RAISING SWING.
HIS SPOKESMAN, AARON MCLEAR SAID THAT THE GOVERNOR THOUGHT THAT SCHOOL CHILDREN WHO TOUR THE CAPITOL WOULD ENJOY TAKING PICTURES WITH THE BEAR.
THE STATUE, BY ARTIST STEVEN BENNETT, IS THE SAME TYPE OF BEAR THAT DECORATES THE CALIFORNIA STATE FLAG.
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Note: I was taught in my broadcasting class with Shrader, to spell out the pronunciation of awkwardly spelled names, even if they are well known.
Revised - Broadcast Style Exercise
Holiday Flights
20 seconds
NORTHWEST AIRLINES ANNOUNCED THIS MORNING, THAT IT IS CUTTING ITS DOMESTIC FARES BY UP TO 40 PERCENT FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELERS.
NORTHWEST AIRLINES C-E-O FRANK DEWITT SAID THAT THEY LIKE TO THINK OF IT AS A HOLIDAY GIFT TO THEIR CUSTOMERS.
TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY FRIDAY FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOVEMBER 12 AND JANUARY 14 IN THE LOWER 48 STATES, ALASKA AND CANADA.
DISCOUNTS VARY DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES AND ARE NOT AVAILABLE ON CERTAIN POPULAR DAYS, INCLUDING NOVEMBER 23, NOVEMBER 26, DECEMBER 23, AND DECEMBER 26.
WITH THE DISCOUNTED NON-REFUNDABLE FARES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUND-TRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR FOUR HUNDRED DOLLARS ON CERTAIN DAYS.
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20 seconds
NORTHWEST AIRLINES ANNOUNCED THIS MORNING, THAT IT IS CUTTING ITS DOMESTIC FARES BY UP TO 40 PERCENT FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELERS.
NORTHWEST AIRLINES C-E-O FRANK DEWITT SAID THAT THEY LIKE TO THINK OF IT AS A HOLIDAY GIFT TO THEIR CUSTOMERS.
TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY FRIDAY FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOVEMBER 12 AND JANUARY 14 IN THE LOWER 48 STATES, ALASKA AND CANADA.
DISCOUNTS VARY DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES AND ARE NOT AVAILABLE ON CERTAIN POPULAR DAYS, INCLUDING NOVEMBER 23, NOVEMBER 26, DECEMBER 23, AND DECEMBER 26.
WITH THE DISCOUNTED NON-REFUNDABLE FARES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUND-TRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR FOUR HUNDRED DOLLARS ON CERTAIN DAYS.
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IMHO extra credit - Journalism: a Risky Business
Future Journalists to Meet Uphill Struggle
“At the peak of the ‘dot com’ boom we were making $125 million a year, just on job placement ads alone,” San Jose Mercury spokesperson, Patty Hannon said.
That was back in the year 2000. In 2008 they only made $15 million on classified ad sales in the San Jose Mercury.
Journalism has become a much less prolific career than it was a century ago. The rise of online classified ad sites such as Ebay and Craigslist have forced newspapers and some magazines into endangerment.
Advertisers would much rather pay a small amount of money to have a banner placed on a Google web search engine than thousands of dollars on one small print ad.
Our parents would pay to subscribe to daily or weekly papers to get their news. Our generation stays well-informed by simply having access to the internet. The truth is, we don’t have to pay for our news, so why would we?
Hannon threw out a question that us Journalism majors must be asking ourselves: “If I’m not paying to get the news, how will I get paid when I work for the industry?”
As a student journalist, I have been told by guest speaker after guest speaker, that I better be prepared to work somewhere far from home for low pay if I want to get my career going.
San Jose Mercury columnist Joe Rodriguez said that it is even harder as a freelancer because you won’t have superiors to train you and help you learn. You don’t get benefits, the pay is low, it is hard to get papers or magazine to pay you for your articles. Some editors will hear your idea then give it to another freelancer that they know will do it for less pay.
I asked them, honestly, if we should just switch majors.
Rodriguez said that he has tried that and did very well in other subjects, but his love was for writing. We should follow what we love and not what will make us money. If we feel like we are meant to be writers and being in the journalism field makes us happy, then stick to it and we should be able to live a happy life and make decent pay.
So, my advice, make sure you are good at writing and that you would be happy to write for free if you want to stay in journalism. If you’re in this mostly for the money, go elsewhere; but I’m sure if you have already chosen journalism as a major, you aren’t a gold digger anyway.
-Justin Riray
Monday, April 6, 2009
Revised - Soft Broadcast Lead
HOW DOES A SQUIRREL STOP MULTIPLE TRAINS ALL AT THE SAME TIME?
BY CLIMBING ONTO THE METRO-NORTH COMMUTER RAILROAD'S POWER LINES AND CAUSING AN ELECTRICAL SURGE.
THE RESULTING POWER OUTAGE LEFT 47-THOUSAND RAIL COMMUTERS STRANDED IN MANHATTAN.
A METRO-NORTH SPOKESWOMAN SAID THAT THE SQUIRREL WAS ELECTROCUTED WHILE SCAMPERING ON THE POWER LINES.
SERVICE IS RESTORED BY CREWS ON TUESDAY MORNING.
note: I think you're right. I probably hit save as draft instead. Perhaps I was incompetent at the time, haha.
BY CLIMBING ONTO THE METRO-NORTH COMMUTER RAILROAD'S POWER LINES AND CAUSING AN ELECTRICAL SURGE.
THE RESULTING POWER OUTAGE LEFT 47-THOUSAND RAIL COMMUTERS STRANDED IN MANHATTAN.
A METRO-NORTH SPOKESWOMAN SAID THAT THE SQUIRREL WAS ELECTROCUTED WHILE SCAMPERING ON THE POWER LINES.
SERVICE IS RESTORED BY CREWS ON TUESDAY MORNING.
note: I think you're right. I probably hit save as draft instead. Perhaps I was incompetent at the time, haha.
Friday, March 20, 2009
Revised - Real Life Reporting - Educational Psychology
California College Students lack Motivation
The California college system, and perhaps the rest of The United States, have failed to successfully motivate students to perform to their full potential according to Roxana Marichi, Ph.D., educational psychologist.
“When students get a tangible reward, like good grades or a top spot in a class, it actually makes them less motivated,” says Marachi.
The college system is based on grades and students are rewarded and valued by rank. This is not the way to motivate us to succeed.
Marachi, San Jose State’s assistant professor of the college of education, led a workshop for teachers and staff about how to better motivate students. The session took place at San Jose State in IRC 101 on March 3 at 1:00 p.m.
It was a smaller classroom that seemed to be at full capacity with only 12 of us there. The seating was meeting room styled with everyone in a circle; a setting that encourages equality between teachers and students.
The basis of the meeting focused on healthy learning versus unhealthy learning. Marachi explained that, behaviorism, on of the oldest learning theories, actually has nothing to do with learning.
For students, grades become the prize at the end. Students learn to work solely for a reward. This works for a short period of time, but is detrimental to their work ethic in the long run.
SJSU e-Campus blackboard.com administrator, Mark Adams said that the top performers in their field “spent an enormous amount of time in practice; they also enjoyed practice.”
The best way to learn is to learn for the sake of learning, and not to pass the class.
Engineering professor, Jacob Tsao, Ph.D., brought up a discussion on what student, Justin Riray, likes to call, “the cemetery syndrome,” in which the entire class seems dead. Tsao said that on a regular basis, he would ask the class a question and not a single hand would raise. Marachi reminded us that it is the teachers responsibility to make the subject matter seem interesting and useful to the students.
Marachi explained the expectancy - value theory of motivation; multiply what the learner expects to learn by the value of the material to calculate their motivation level. “This is a multiplicative model, it is not additive,” Marachi said.
“If one of them is zero, then they are all zero.”
It was discussed that if a student believes they will do well, but is not at all interested in the subject, or visa versa, then they will have zero motivation.
Dennis Hungridge, M.A., a human resources workforce planning manager reminded us how the U.S. has built itself on opposite values from the rest of the world.
“The cultural myth of the United States is working hard; not education,” claimed Hungridge.
While Europe and most of Asia founded their worth on knowledge and learning in order to succeed, the United States has founded it’s values on working hard.
Since society has taught this generation to work for short term goals, they have developed short term motivation. People give up to easily. Failing just one class could completely hinder a student’s full potential, because they are likely label themselves a failure from then on.
Marichi advised that students have to learn to love school for the sake of increasing out knowledge and preparing themselves for life using the tools offered to us by teachers. People also need to be optimistic about difficult trials and failures.
Michael Jordan was cut from his high school basketball team.
Jordan once observed, “I’ve failed over and over again in my life.”
“That is why I succeed.”
-Justin Riray, SJSU Journalism Major
Thursday, March 12, 2009
Libel? Playing Editor!
Play editor! Read the following draft of a college newspaper story and determine if it contains any passages that are libelous. If you believe you have found a libelous passage, describe the passage and why you believe it is libelous. Then briefly explain what you would need to do to fix it -- or what you would need to omit -- before running the story. (Or would you run it at all?)
Here's the draft to review for libel:
A sophomore at Springfield University claims a chemistry professor has sexually harassed her.
Karen Hart, 123 Hill Hall, says the professor, George O.T. Jungle, has touched her during tutoring sessions in his office and has invited her to his apartment several times. She said she declined his invitations.
"I am having trouble in the class and I have to go see him to get help with my papers and projects," Hart said. "But I am scared to go in his office now."
Jungle denied having an improper contact with the student and threatened this newspaper with a libel suit if it published the story.
Hart said she is thinking of filing a formal complaint with the university.
"I don't know how to do that," she said. "I don't know what to do."
This is perfect, I am currently taking Mass Communications Law, Mcom 101.
So, I’ll give my expert opinion!
First of all, for a statement to be labeled “actionable libel” it MUST be false. So, I cannot be truly sure about whether or not the statements are libelous or not because I do not know if they are true. So, I’ll do my best.
The first sentence is libelous is it is a false statement or if whoever gathered that information from Karen made the news gatherer promise confidentiality--to not repeat or publish what she told him or her.
This is on the verge of libel, but it is not. The writer makes a good move by always including “she said,” in the statements. But still, this is too detailed to release to the public considering she hasn’t even filed a formal complaint.
It is not libelous, but it is stupid to write a story without reasonable proof. Just hearing this news from a student is not enough.
I would omit the parts in the second paragraph about Jungle touching her or inviting her to his apartment. Also, in the fourth paragraph the use of the word “threatened” has a very negative connotation. I would either omit that sentence, or at least not use “threatened.”
The entire piece seems like it was meant to ruin Jungle’s reputation, which is one of the characteristics of a libelous publication.
Overall, this is very libelous, but I am not sure if it would be labeled completely libelous in court. I would have to know more about the truth of the statements Hart and Jungle made.
If I were the editor, I would leave it a short, impersonal article and not name the teacher. However, if Hart told my reporter that she wanted to be named, then I would name her.
Here's the draft to review for libel:
A sophomore at Springfield University claims a chemistry professor has sexually harassed her.
Karen Hart, 123 Hill Hall, says the professor, George O.T. Jungle, has touched her during tutoring sessions in his office and has invited her to his apartment several times. She said she declined his invitations.
"I am having trouble in the class and I have to go see him to get help with my papers and projects," Hart said. "But I am scared to go in his office now."
Jungle denied having an improper contact with the student and threatened this newspaper with a libel suit if it published the story.
Hart said she is thinking of filing a formal complaint with the university.
"I don't know how to do that," she said. "I don't know what to do."
This is perfect, I am currently taking Mass Communications Law, Mcom 101.
So, I’ll give my expert opinion!
First of all, for a statement to be labeled “actionable libel” it MUST be false. So, I cannot be truly sure about whether or not the statements are libelous or not because I do not know if they are true. So, I’ll do my best.
The first sentence is libelous is it is a false statement or if whoever gathered that information from Karen made the news gatherer promise confidentiality--to not repeat or publish what she told him or her.
This is on the verge of libel, but it is not. The writer makes a good move by always including “she said,” in the statements. But still, this is too detailed to release to the public considering she hasn’t even filed a formal complaint.
It is not libelous, but it is stupid to write a story without reasonable proof. Just hearing this news from a student is not enough.
I would omit the parts in the second paragraph about Jungle touching her or inviting her to his apartment. Also, in the fourth paragraph the use of the word “threatened” has a very negative connotation. I would either omit that sentence, or at least not use “threatened.”
The entire piece seems like it was meant to ruin Jungle’s reputation, which is one of the characteristics of a libelous publication.
Overall, this is very libelous, but I am not sure if it would be labeled completely libelous in court. I would have to know more about the truth of the statements Hart and Jungle made.
If I were the editor, I would leave it a short, impersonal article and not name the teacher. However, if Hart told my reporter that she wanted to be named, then I would name her.
Copy edit the World #3 (extra)
This is from my Cases in Communications book by Zelezny.The sentence reads: Respondent publishes American Opinion, a monthly outlet for the views of the John Birth Society.
This is a GFE: It should be "the John Birch Society"
Didn't get to take a picture of it, but in the "One and Done for SJSU" sports article in the Wednesday March 11th, 2009 issue of the Spartan Daily there was a GFE!
Under the picture it named "Chastity Shavers" but in the scoring chart it read: "C. Shaver"
So, I am not sure which one is wrong, but one of them is!
This is from one of my sister's high school text books. I can get the name of it if you would like me to, but she's in school right now and isn't texting me back.The sentence, show in two consistent pictures, is: Your purpose to kill me.
That isn't a complete sentence. It should say: Your purpose is to kill me.
It says " ... student that is majoring in broadcast journalism who shown ... "It should say " ... who has shown ... "
My next three corrections come from this book.
IEE should be IIE for the Institute of International Education.
From Edward R. Murrow..., there should be commas before and after the word "officially" and it should read: Although, officially, its assistant director ...
This is also from Edward R. Murrow and the Birth of Broadcast Journalism by Bob Edwards. It should be written as: Alger Hiss'
Hapiness should read: Happiness. Plus, I have no idea why all those words are capitalized. I found this in a newspaper back home in Pittsburg. It was probably the Contra Costa Times classifieds.
Ethical Decision Making
Scenario 1
You are interviewing a high government official about her involvement in a bribery scheme, when she is called out of her office. While alone, you notice some documents on her desk that appear to be related to your investigation.
Would you read them? Take them? Ask her
about them when she returns?
I would ask her about them when she returns, most likely. However, if it were a story that I was very passionate about and I felt like the government was keeping a bad secret from the American public I might take a peek at them, but it would have to be on a day that I am feeling extra brave and risky.
Also, it wouldn’t be the disrespect of personal privacy that would keep me away from looking at the papers. It would be fear of being caught snooping. I’m just being honest. I for sure wouldn’t just take them; that is plain stupid. She would ask where the hell her papers went, then I’d be caught, and screwed.
I am aware that it would be a breach of privacy, or illegal interception of classified documents, but I still say there would be a one percent chance I’d go for a quick glance. That means I’d have a one percent chance of serving jail time and would have to kiss my career goodbye.
Scenario 2
Conditions at a local nursing home are known to be substandard. It’s privately owned, and efforts to gain admittance or information have failed. Your editor asks you to get a job as an orderly and write a story based on your first-hand experiences.
Would you do it? Why or why not?
I would love to, unfortunately I wouldn’t want to do any undercover reporting that had to do with grubby situations. I would only go undercover for positive, or fun stories. Being an undercover reporter to uncover an individual’s or a company’s mistakes and incorrect activities is like going up to a police officer and punching them in the face; you’re just asking to be thrown in prison.
Scenario 3
You are writing a feature story and find some excellent quotes about your subject from another written source.
– May you use those quotes as if you
obtained them yourself, or must you
credit the other written source?
– What if you obtained the quotes from a
web site?
Of course I would cite the paper, magazine, or website I got it from. I would cite the author of the article or piece I took the quotes from. Even though it is nice to be the first to come up with a news story, I am very sure readers don’t subtract points from an article just for citing information from another article.
In fact, most news stories come from information from wire services or other newspapers or websites. So, there is nothing to be ashamed of about quoting another journalistic source.
Definitely, always, quote anything that you did not come up with, yourself.
You are interviewing a high government official about her involvement in a bribery scheme, when she is called out of her office. While alone, you notice some documents on her desk that appear to be related to your investigation.
Would you read them? Take them? Ask her
about them when she returns?
I would ask her about them when she returns, most likely. However, if it were a story that I was very passionate about and I felt like the government was keeping a bad secret from the American public I might take a peek at them, but it would have to be on a day that I am feeling extra brave and risky.
Also, it wouldn’t be the disrespect of personal privacy that would keep me away from looking at the papers. It would be fear of being caught snooping. I’m just being honest. I for sure wouldn’t just take them; that is plain stupid. She would ask where the hell her papers went, then I’d be caught, and screwed.
I am aware that it would be a breach of privacy, or illegal interception of classified documents, but I still say there would be a one percent chance I’d go for a quick glance. That means I’d have a one percent chance of serving jail time and would have to kiss my career goodbye.
Scenario 2
Conditions at a local nursing home are known to be substandard. It’s privately owned, and efforts to gain admittance or information have failed. Your editor asks you to get a job as an orderly and write a story based on your first-hand experiences.
Would you do it? Why or why not?
I would love to, unfortunately I wouldn’t want to do any undercover reporting that had to do with grubby situations. I would only go undercover for positive, or fun stories. Being an undercover reporter to uncover an individual’s or a company’s mistakes and incorrect activities is like going up to a police officer and punching them in the face; you’re just asking to be thrown in prison.
Scenario 3
You are writing a feature story and find some excellent quotes about your subject from another written source.
– May you use those quotes as if you
obtained them yourself, or must you
credit the other written source?
– What if you obtained the quotes from a
web site?
Of course I would cite the paper, magazine, or website I got it from. I would cite the author of the article or piece I took the quotes from. Even though it is nice to be the first to come up with a news story, I am very sure readers don’t subtract points from an article just for citing information from another article.
In fact, most news stories come from information from wire services or other newspapers or websites. So, there is nothing to be ashamed of about quoting another journalistic source.
Definitely, always, quote anything that you did not come up with, yourself.
My Fog Index is 12.7
Fog Index test
Excerpt from “The Future of News: That’s us”
95 words
Why shouldn’t we just sit back and perform the way all of our college textbooks instruct us to? If anyone thinks news is just delivering facts, and that it is a piece of cake, the truth is that creativity and organizational skills need to be of the highest caliber in order to stay with the ever-changing world. We are all striving to play a part in the future of news, so damn right this business is competitive. Writers pull-over, because up and coming journalists are equipped with so much more than a pencil and paper.
Average words per sentence: 23.75
“Hard” word count: 8
23.75 + 8 = 31.75
31.75 x 0.4 = 12.7
My Fog Index = 12.7
First of all, I learned what a Fog Index is. At first I thought it would be some stupid, useless way to rate writing. But it is in fact, an almost perfect way of calculating the readability of my written content.
It is nice to know to shoot for a Fog Index of eight. I think, recently, I have been writing at a fog index of 14, even when I do my best to simplify things.
This was very interesting; I’m pretty sure I will remember how to calculate the Fog Index for the rest of my life; or at least until I become a retired, senile journalist.
I have one question. Do hyphenated words count as one or two words? Because I had two hyphenated words in my excerpt. Just wondering. Thank you!
Excerpt from “The Future of News: That’s us”
95 words
Why shouldn’t we just sit back and perform the way all of our college textbooks instruct us to? If anyone thinks news is just delivering facts, and that it is a piece of cake, the truth is that creativity and organizational skills need to be of the highest caliber in order to stay with the ever-changing world. We are all striving to play a part in the future of news, so damn right this business is competitive. Writers pull-over, because up and coming journalists are equipped with so much more than a pencil and paper.
Average words per sentence: 23.75
“Hard” word count: 8
23.75 + 8 = 31.75
31.75 x 0.4 = 12.7
My Fog Index = 12.7
First of all, I learned what a Fog Index is. At first I thought it would be some stupid, useless way to rate writing. But it is in fact, an almost perfect way of calculating the readability of my written content.
It is nice to know to shoot for a Fog Index of eight. I think, recently, I have been writing at a fog index of 14, even when I do my best to simplify things.
This was very interesting; I’m pretty sure I will remember how to calculate the Fog Index for the rest of my life; or at least until I become a retired, senile journalist.
I have one question. Do hyphenated words count as one or two words? Because I had two hyphenated words in my excerpt. Just wondering. Thank you!
Got what it takes to be a Reporter? Apparently, I do.
Talent
1. I enjoy reading. I consume a lot of books and magazines.
-Not True.
2. For me, writing is rewarding. And I am confident that people genuinely enjoy the stuff I write.
-Mostly True.
3. I don’t pay much attention to spelling.
-Not True.
4. I’m generally adept at computer technology.
-Mostly True.
5. I can organize my ideas and write quickly when I need to.
-Mostly True.
6. I’d make a good game show contestant because I’m pretty good at remembering facts and trivia.
-Mostly True
7. I am efficient and self-sufficient when it comes to doing extensive library research.
-Mostly True.
Temperament
8. I’m generally more curious than most people I know.
-Mostly True.
9. In public situations, I’m pretty shy.
-FALSE
10. I think it’s unpatriotic to question or criticize our government.
-Not True. … umm, democracy. Duh.
11. When I choose a career, I’ll require a stable 9-to-5 job where my workday is routine and I make big money.
-Not True.
12. If I really want something, I’m tenacious until I get it.
-Not True.
13. When I’m under pressure, I can keep my cool and stay focused without losing my temper.
-Mostly True (when it comes to work and school)
14. When strangers or teachers criticize what I write, it really bugs me.
-Not True.
Total Points:
0 + 3 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 2 + 2 = 12
3 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 3 + 1 + 2 = 15
12 + 15 = 27
I think that this was a pretty fun and practical reporter test. Still, it seems way to easy to answer these questions in favor of the ‘right’ answers. I answered every question truthfully, unfortunately I doubt that I am “27 out of 30,” for my reporter potential.
The test did teach me a few things about being a reporter, or at least reminded me of certain concepts. Still, I don’t think reading the examples of rough situations really makes me feel the stress I would truly feel as a reporter.
1. I enjoy reading. I consume a lot of books and magazines.
-Not True.
2. For me, writing is rewarding. And I am confident that people genuinely enjoy the stuff I write.
-Mostly True.
3. I don’t pay much attention to spelling.
-Not True.
4. I’m generally adept at computer technology.
-Mostly True.
5. I can organize my ideas and write quickly when I need to.
-Mostly True.
6. I’d make a good game show contestant because I’m pretty good at remembering facts and trivia.
-Mostly True
7. I am efficient and self-sufficient when it comes to doing extensive library research.
-Mostly True.
Temperament
8. I’m generally more curious than most people I know.
-Mostly True.
9. In public situations, I’m pretty shy.
-FALSE
10. I think it’s unpatriotic to question or criticize our government.
-Not True. … umm, democracy. Duh.
11. When I choose a career, I’ll require a stable 9-to-5 job where my workday is routine and I make big money.
-Not True.
12. If I really want something, I’m tenacious until I get it.
-Not True.
13. When I’m under pressure, I can keep my cool and stay focused without losing my temper.
-Mostly True (when it comes to work and school)
14. When strangers or teachers criticize what I write, it really bugs me.
-Not True.
Total Points:
0 + 3 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 2 + 2 = 12
3 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 3 + 1 + 2 = 15
12 + 15 = 27
I think that this was a pretty fun and practical reporter test. Still, it seems way to easy to answer these questions in favor of the ‘right’ answers. I answered every question truthfully, unfortunately I doubt that I am “27 out of 30,” for my reporter potential.
The test did teach me a few things about being a reporter, or at least reminded me of certain concepts. Still, I don’t think reading the examples of rough situations really makes me feel the stress I would truly feel as a reporter.
Tuesday, March 10, 2009
Profile (full version) - Principal Joe Siino
Justin Riray
3/9/09
Jour 61 - McCune
Profile (J. Siino)
Word Count: 770
Ever wonder what it would be like to donate your heart and brain … to thousands of kids? The principal of a prekindergarten to 8th grade Catholic school, Joe Siino, of Pittsburg, Calif., has been doing that for a living for over 25 years.
St. Peter Martyr School used to sit between a rundown, weed-filled back lot and a not-so-flattering Pacific Gas and Energy plant. Today, it is surrounded by beautiful houses, a wonderful city park, and a newly renovated downtown area.
Students that attend SPM go through an even sweeter transformation thanks to the very knowledgeable and caring school faculty, led by Siino.
“I always enjoyed teaching and often volunteered in any opportunity I had through college coaching and tutoring students individually and in small groups,” Siino said. He earned a B.S. Degree in Business Administration and Economics at St. Mary’s College but, shortly after, changed direction. “After graduation from college I worked briefly with a consulting firm on a part time basis and did substitute teaching in the local public school districts to help pay bills.” He enjoyed teaching so much he pursued his teaching credential and only two years after receiving it, became the vice principal of SPM!
His friends and family were not surprised as his new choice of career, though they did feel that he would have made more money if he were to stay with business. “My family was always supportive. My dad died while I was in high school and my mom raised all of her six children to follow our goals and to be independent.”
Despite his family hardship, Siino continued to make them proud; just five years after teaching he became the school principal at the young age of 28. Since then, he has also received the Mother Seton Award, an honor bestowed by the Oakland Diocese to someone who has made a significant difference through service.
His favorite parts of the job is working with students and watching their educational development, planning and implementing instructional curriculum with his fellow teachers, and meeting and working with the school families.
“Just recently I had a parent tell me how much their child enjoys coming to school and complimenting the atmosphere of the school. It is inspiring to see many of our alumni choosing to bring their children to our school.” Siino says it is very memorable when people tell him that he played a part in helping them become a better person.
He is the epitome of a teacher, Christian leader, and friend. His perfect mix of professionalism and kind-hearted disposition makes him the perfect school principal. SPM 2002 Alumnus, Justin Reynoso remembers, “He taught with his opinion--his heart. He taught in a way that helped us understand what the book was trying to convey.”
I always used to ask Mr. Siino how he kept the name of every single student and their parents, and no matter how busy he was he always had time to listen and talk to any student no matter how important. “He had the characteristics of a model principal; we all respected him,” said Reynoso. Out of all the principals I’ve ever known, Mr. Siino is the only one that I have never heard anyone say anything bad about.
Siino also knows the meaning of hard work. “I try to meet my difficulties head on and with honesty. If I need to get things done I have never been afraid to put in long hours. If I need advice I consult with peers. I also accept that not every problem has a quick fix.”
It is rough trying to balance budgets, collecting tuition, plan and carry out fundraisers, all while teaching; and it is a known fact that a grade school principal’s salary does not come close to the amount of work they put in or the difference they make in a community. “I grew up very simply and never really felt the need to have an excessive amount of things or money. I have always thankful for a job and health benefits.”
The best piece of advice he had ever received was, “ … trust in myself and live each day to the fullest.” He has helped thousands of people, including myself, adopt this principle into their own lives.
Always the same, lovable principal, Siino tells students to take advantage of all the knowledge and wisdom available and to learn and respect life. “Learning does not end at college. Hopefully, it inspires you to be a lifelong learner.” It’s funny how the man who offers this advice is not only a lifelong learner, but a lifelong teacher as well.
3/9/09
Jour 61 - McCune
Profile (J. Siino)
Word Count: 770
Incredible Principal gives his all for Students
[Joseph Siino]
[Joseph Siino]
(full profile)
Ever wonder what it would be like to donate your heart and brain … to thousands of kids? The principal of a prekindergarten to 8th grade Catholic school, Joe Siino, of Pittsburg, Calif., has been doing that for a living for over 25 years.
St. Peter Martyr School used to sit between a rundown, weed-filled back lot and a not-so-flattering Pacific Gas and Energy plant. Today, it is surrounded by beautiful houses, a wonderful city park, and a newly renovated downtown area.
Students that attend SPM go through an even sweeter transformation thanks to the very knowledgeable and caring school faculty, led by Siino.
“I always enjoyed teaching and often volunteered in any opportunity I had through college coaching and tutoring students individually and in small groups,” Siino said. He earned a B.S. Degree in Business Administration and Economics at St. Mary’s College but, shortly after, changed direction. “After graduation from college I worked briefly with a consulting firm on a part time basis and did substitute teaching in the local public school districts to help pay bills.” He enjoyed teaching so much he pursued his teaching credential and only two years after receiving it, became the vice principal of SPM!
His friends and family were not surprised as his new choice of career, though they did feel that he would have made more money if he were to stay with business. “My family was always supportive. My dad died while I was in high school and my mom raised all of her six children to follow our goals and to be independent.”
Despite his family hardship, Siino continued to make them proud; just five years after teaching he became the school principal at the young age of 28. Since then, he has also received the Mother Seton Award, an honor bestowed by the Oakland Diocese to someone who has made a significant difference through service.
His favorite parts of the job is working with students and watching their educational development, planning and implementing instructional curriculum with his fellow teachers, and meeting and working with the school families.
“Just recently I had a parent tell me how much their child enjoys coming to school and complimenting the atmosphere of the school. It is inspiring to see many of our alumni choosing to bring their children to our school.” Siino says it is very memorable when people tell him that he played a part in helping them become a better person.
He is the epitome of a teacher, Christian leader, and friend. His perfect mix of professionalism and kind-hearted disposition makes him the perfect school principal. SPM 2002 Alumnus, Justin Reynoso remembers, “He taught with his opinion--his heart. He taught in a way that helped us understand what the book was trying to convey.”
I always used to ask Mr. Siino how he kept the name of every single student and their parents, and no matter how busy he was he always had time to listen and talk to any student no matter how important. “He had the characteristics of a model principal; we all respected him,” said Reynoso. Out of all the principals I’ve ever known, Mr. Siino is the only one that I have never heard anyone say anything bad about.
Siino also knows the meaning of hard work. “I try to meet my difficulties head on and with honesty. If I need to get things done I have never been afraid to put in long hours. If I need advice I consult with peers. I also accept that not every problem has a quick fix.”
It is rough trying to balance budgets, collecting tuition, plan and carry out fundraisers, all while teaching; and it is a known fact that a grade school principal’s salary does not come close to the amount of work they put in or the difference they make in a community. “I grew up very simply and never really felt the need to have an excessive amount of things or money. I have always thankful for a job and health benefits.”
The best piece of advice he had ever received was, “ … trust in myself and live each day to the fullest.” He has helped thousands of people, including myself, adopt this principle into their own lives.
Always the same, lovable principal, Siino tells students to take advantage of all the knowledge and wisdom available and to learn and respect life. “Learning does not end at college. Hopefully, it inspires you to be a lifelong learner.” It’s funny how the man who offers this advice is not only a lifelong learner, but a lifelong teacher as well.
-Justin Riray
Profile - Principal Joe Siino
Incredible Principal gives his all for Students
[Joseph Siino]
[Joseph Siino]
(shortened profile)
Ever wonder what it would be like to donate your heart and brain … to thousands of kids? The principal of a K-8 Catholic school, Joe Siino, of Pittsburg, Calif., has been doing that for a living for over 25 years.
Students that attend St. Peter Martyr School experience an amazing education thanks to the very knowledgeable and caring school faculty, led by Siino.
“I always enjoyed teaching and often volunteered in any opportunity I had through college coaching and tutoring students individually and in small groups,” Siino said. He earned a B.S. Degree in Business Administration and Economics at St. Mary’s College but, shortly after, changed direction. “After graduation from college I worked briefly with a consulting firm on a part time basis and did substitute teaching in the local public school districts to help pay bills.” Within two years he became the vice principal of SPM!
“My dad died while I was in high school and my mom raised all of her six children to follow our goals and to be independent.” But, despite his family hardship, Siino continued to make them proud; just five years after teaching he became the school principal at the young age of 28. Since then, he has also received the Mother Seton Award, an honor bestowed by the Oakland Diocese to someone who has made a significant difference through service.
His favorite parts of the job is working with students and watching their educational development, planning and implementing instructional curriculum with his fellow teachers, and meeting and working with families.
“Just recently I had a parent tell me how much their child enjoys coming to school and complimenting the atmosphere of the school. It is inspiring to see many of our alumni choosing to bring their children to our school.”
His perfect mix of professionalism and kind-hearted disposition makes him the perfect school principal. SPM 2002 Alumnus, Justin Reynoso remembers, “He taught with his opinion--his heart. He taught in a way that helped us understand what the book was trying to convey.” Out of all the principals I’ve ever known, Mr. Siino is the only one that I have never heard anyone say anything bad about. “He had the characteristics of a model principal; we all respected him.”
Siino also knows the meaning of hard work. “I try to meet my difficulties head on and with honesty. If I need to get things done I have never been afraid to put in long hours.”
The best piece of advice he had ever received was, “ … trust in myself and live each day to the fullest.” He has helped thousands of people, including myself, adopt this principle into their own lives.
Always the same, lovable principal, Siino teaches students to take advantage of all the knowledge and wisdom available and to learn and respect life. “Learning does not end at college. Hopefully, it inspires you to be a lifelong learner.” It’s funny how the man who offers this advice is not only a lifelong learner, but a lifelong teacher as well.
-Justin Riray
Friday, March 6, 2009
Revised - AP Stylebook Exercise S-Z
Justin Riray
JOUR 61 – AP Style Exercise (S-Z)
20 errors / 20 points
1) He thought of Smokey Bear every time he got near a smoldering fire or entered a smoky room. (3)
2) The forecast is for lower temperatures, falling to the low 30s by tonight. If the rain continues, as expected, there could be a traveler’s advisory. (3)
3) To celebrate Veterans Day, the anniversary of the armistice that ended World War I, troops of former soldiers will march down Main Street carrying U.S. flags. (3)
4) His weeklong ordeal will be finished when finals week is over. Until then, his well-being is in doubt. (2)
5) A 19-year-old man was arrested Monday for carrying a handgun without a permit. After being released on bond, he disappeared. His whereabouts is unknown. (4)
6) She’d hoped to be able to trade in her car after getting a tuneup, but she totaled it last night. (3)
7) Could you photocopy that invoice for me? I need it for our year-end budget. (2)
JOUR 61 – AP Style Exercise (S-Z)
20 errors / 20 points
1) He thought of Smokey Bear every time he got near a smoldering fire or entered a smoky room. (3)
2) The forecast is for lower temperatures, falling to the low 30s by tonight. If the rain continues, as expected, there could be a traveler’s advisory. (3)
3) To celebrate Veterans Day, the anniversary of the armistice that ended World War I, troops of former soldiers will march down Main Street carrying U.S. flags. (3)
4) His weeklong ordeal will be finished when finals week is over. Until then, his well-being is in doubt. (2)
5) A 19-year-old man was arrested Monday for carrying a handgun without a permit. After being released on bond, he disappeared. His whereabouts is unknown. (4)
6) She’d hoped to be able to trade in her car after getting a tuneup, but she totaled it last night. (3)
7) Could you photocopy that invoice for me? I need it for our year-end budget. (2)
Revised - Math for Journalists
1.
You would be surprised that some schools make five percent of their budget from student tuition. This local college said that two-thirds of its total budget of $120 million comes from the state. Only 28% comes from grants or donations.
2.
Average sentence for people convicted for aggravated assault in San Jose in one month in 2006: Just over a year in prison and 13 months of probation.
Median: One year in prison and two years of probation.
The median figure is more accurate in this situation because the highest number is more than five times the other sentences. The number is so far out from the group of other figures that it would be ridiculous to present the mean as “the average.” The median, in this case, is a more truthful representation of the average jail sentence.
3.
California sales tax: 8.25%
People who spend $5 on fast-food, weekly, would save:
$5 x 0.0825 x 52 = $21.45
People who spend $20 on food, weekly, would save:
$21.45 x 4 = $85.80
You would be surprised that some schools make five percent of their budget from student tuition. This local college said that two-thirds of its total budget of $120 million comes from the state. Only 28% comes from grants or donations.
2.
Average sentence for people convicted for aggravated assault in San Jose in one month in 2006: Just over a year in prison and 13 months of probation.
Median: One year in prison and two years of probation.
The median figure is more accurate in this situation because the highest number is more than five times the other sentences. The number is so far out from the group of other figures that it would be ridiculous to present the mean as “the average.” The median, in this case, is a more truthful representation of the average jail sentence.
3.
California sales tax: 8.25%
People who spend $5 on fast-food, weekly, would save:
$5 x 0.0825 x 52 = $21.45
People who spend $20 on food, weekly, would save:
$21.45 x 4 = $85.80
Thursday, March 5, 2009
Copy Edit the World #2
This one is from Cases in Communication Law by Zelezny. "Hays" is actually supposed to be "Hayes."
This is from Mass Media Law, by Pember. "Nonconfidential" should be "Non-confidential," according to the AP style book.
The bottom of the 1st picture and the top of the second picture: "Names not commonly before the public not should not be reduced to acronyms solely to save a few words."It should say "Names not commonly known before the public..."
On Prof. McCune’s blog Mike commented:
“Just passing by.Btw, you website have great content!”
The main correction is to change “you website have great content” to “your website has great content”
If you want to be picky, there needs to be a space between “by.” and “Btw”
And if you want to be even more picky, spell btw out as “by the way,” but this is a casual comment on the internet, so “btw” seems acceptable.
Saturday, February 28, 2009
The Future of News: That's us
Justin Riray
2/28/09
Jour 61
The Future of News
Word Count: 464
We are the future of news. One could argue that news relies on events; accidents, conflicts, touching stories. I believe that news relies on its reporters and journalists. Without us, people wouldn’t get news. We are the link between the human race and their knowledge of that is going on around them.
It seems as if almost every journalism graduate that doesn’t get an internship feels like they are ‘settling’ for being a freelancer. If you think about it, many of the free content websites were created and developed by a nobody - a freelancer. Google, Youtube, and Myspace were all produced by smart people who chose to do their own thing with their skills instead of working an entry-level job at some well known company. The world of journalism will always rely on freelancers to do the ‘guerilla inventing.’ While large and prosperous companies stay doing what they do best, it is usually the freelancers who come up with ground breaking technology or methods of news media.
Even if new journalists do work for a large company, in a way, they are all freelancers. Veterans will always be able to get the job done, but it is the interns and the rookies that always have the opportunity to bring something fresh to the table; and opportunity to change the world of news. Mindy McAdams emphasizes the importance that we know how to work as many programs and properly use as much equipment as possible. The more we know how to manipulate media and news, the better journalists we will be. Many young aspiring writers and broadcasters may have the notion that journalism is just writing; I was one of them, and boy was it shocking to know that knowing how to write extremely well was just the tip of the iceberg.
In the “recovering journalist “ blog, the author reminds us to do our best to concentrate on concentrate on projects and products that are groundbreaking. The faster we learn how to adapt to new programs and methods, the more prepared we will be to become a journalist of the future.
Why shouldn’t we just sit back and perform the way all of our college textbooks instruct us to? If anyone thinks news is just delivering facts, and that it is a piece of cake, the truth is that creativity and organizational skills need to be of the highest caliber in order to stay with the ever-changing world. We are all striving to play a part in the future of news, so damn right this business is competitive. Writers pull-over, because up and coming journalists are equipped with so much more than a pencil and paper.
My favorite excerpts from the blog links:
http://mindymcadams.com/tojou/2009/advice-for-journalism-students-now/
*Browse through some of the links listed below and read some blog posts and/or articles on the changing face of journalism. Then pick two or three pieces that you find interesting and write your own blog post on "The Future of News." In your blog post, discuss some of the ideas and innovations you've read about and what promise you think they may hold for the future of journalism. Also, do they give you any new ideas about your own career options?
Would you recommend that college students/recent grads become a freelancer — either as a way to get experience before becoming an employee, or to make a career of it?
1. Yes: 71 (provides experience/clips; gets your foot in door; proves yourself valuable to decision-makers for hiring)
2. Hedged response: 11 (difficult to make a living; not as a career; only as last resort)
3. No: 4 (difficult to make a living; cannot hire experienced writers in entry-level positions)
At a minimum, new hires need to know how things like blogs, rss feeds, twitter and google alerts work just to leverage them in reporting and to monitor the beat online. But you also have to be confident and competent enough to grab a camera and a laptop and run to the scene of a fire when you’re the only one around. Oh, and while you still need to be able to craft that compelling narrative for tomorrow’s front stoop, you also need to write cleanly and quickly on deadline for the Web.
I don’t use my Web skills in my day job every day. But I do use them. And when there’s a new idea I suggest or they want to try, because I have those skills and exploit them more than any other reporter here, I’m the go-to person on experimenting with the cool new things we’re doing. I can’t complain about that.
http://recoveringjournalist.typepad.com/recovering_journalist/2009/02/whos-doing-.html
I'm going to skim over a few things, like Twitter, that have quickly become mainstream, and try to concentrate on products and projects that are breaking new ground–and hopefully can become examples for others to replicate. Some are fairly well-known; others have been too obscure, in my view. But all of them should be more widely adopted. Just about every news site should be doing versions of every one of these, and more.
“Concentrate on projects and products that are breaking new ground.”
Tribune Co. has taken a lot of heat for some of its management's wacky ideas, but a couple of the Chicago Tribune's ongoing projects are real pathbreakers. TribLocal is probably the strongest effort yet at creating a hyperlocal site that combines professional and user-generated content; as a co-founder of Backfence and close follower of all things hyperlocal, I've watched TribLocal closely and with much admiration. It's expanded to more than 40 Chicago suburbs and seems to be getting traction with readers and advertisers. Tribune's other interesting endeavor is Colonel Tribune, maybe the single must unusual thing being done online by any major newspaper. Col. Tribune is a fictional character created by the Tribune as a sort of host of and guide to the newspaper site and, more significantly, a participant in social networks like Facebook and Twitter (where the colonel has 5,400 followers). If nothing else, the colonel gives a somewhat drab news site a touch of personality.
2/28/09
Jour 61
The Future of News
Word Count: 464
We are the future of news. One could argue that news relies on events; accidents, conflicts, touching stories. I believe that news relies on its reporters and journalists. Without us, people wouldn’t get news. We are the link between the human race and their knowledge of that is going on around them.
It seems as if almost every journalism graduate that doesn’t get an internship feels like they are ‘settling’ for being a freelancer. If you think about it, many of the free content websites were created and developed by a nobody - a freelancer. Google, Youtube, and Myspace were all produced by smart people who chose to do their own thing with their skills instead of working an entry-level job at some well known company. The world of journalism will always rely on freelancers to do the ‘guerilla inventing.’ While large and prosperous companies stay doing what they do best, it is usually the freelancers who come up with ground breaking technology or methods of news media.
Even if new journalists do work for a large company, in a way, they are all freelancers. Veterans will always be able to get the job done, but it is the interns and the rookies that always have the opportunity to bring something fresh to the table; and opportunity to change the world of news. Mindy McAdams emphasizes the importance that we know how to work as many programs and properly use as much equipment as possible. The more we know how to manipulate media and news, the better journalists we will be. Many young aspiring writers and broadcasters may have the notion that journalism is just writing; I was one of them, and boy was it shocking to know that knowing how to write extremely well was just the tip of the iceberg.
In the “recovering journalist “ blog, the author reminds us to do our best to concentrate on concentrate on projects and products that are groundbreaking. The faster we learn how to adapt to new programs and methods, the more prepared we will be to become a journalist of the future.
Why shouldn’t we just sit back and perform the way all of our college textbooks instruct us to? If anyone thinks news is just delivering facts, and that it is a piece of cake, the truth is that creativity and organizational skills need to be of the highest caliber in order to stay with the ever-changing world. We are all striving to play a part in the future of news, so damn right this business is competitive. Writers pull-over, because up and coming journalists are equipped with so much more than a pencil and paper.
My favorite excerpts from the blog links:
http://mindymcadams.com/tojou/2009/advice-for-journalism-students-now/
*Browse through some of the links listed below and read some blog posts and/or articles on the changing face of journalism. Then pick two or three pieces that you find interesting and write your own blog post on "The Future of News." In your blog post, discuss some of the ideas and innovations you've read about and what promise you think they may hold for the future of journalism. Also, do they give you any new ideas about your own career options?
Would you recommend that college students/recent grads become a freelancer — either as a way to get experience before becoming an employee, or to make a career of it?
1. Yes: 71 (provides experience/clips; gets your foot in door; proves yourself valuable to decision-makers for hiring)
2. Hedged response: 11 (difficult to make a living; not as a career; only as last resort)
3. No: 4 (difficult to make a living; cannot hire experienced writers in entry-level positions)
At a minimum, new hires need to know how things like blogs, rss feeds, twitter and google alerts work just to leverage them in reporting and to monitor the beat online. But you also have to be confident and competent enough to grab a camera and a laptop and run to the scene of a fire when you’re the only one around. Oh, and while you still need to be able to craft that compelling narrative for tomorrow’s front stoop, you also need to write cleanly and quickly on deadline for the Web.
I don’t use my Web skills in my day job every day. But I do use them. And when there’s a new idea I suggest or they want to try, because I have those skills and exploit them more than any other reporter here, I’m the go-to person on experimenting with the cool new things we’re doing. I can’t complain about that.
http://recoveringjournalist.typepad.com/recovering_journalist/2009/02/whos-doing-.html
I'm going to skim over a few things, like Twitter, that have quickly become mainstream, and try to concentrate on products and projects that are breaking new ground–and hopefully can become examples for others to replicate. Some are fairly well-known; others have been too obscure, in my view. But all of them should be more widely adopted. Just about every news site should be doing versions of every one of these, and more.
“Concentrate on projects and products that are breaking new ground.”
Tribune Co. has taken a lot of heat for some of its management's wacky ideas, but a couple of the Chicago Tribune's ongoing projects are real pathbreakers. TribLocal is probably the strongest effort yet at creating a hyperlocal site that combines professional and user-generated content; as a co-founder of Backfence and close follower of all things hyperlocal, I've watched TribLocal closely and with much admiration. It's expanded to more than 40 Chicago suburbs and seems to be getting traction with readers and advertisers. Tribune's other interesting endeavor is Colonel Tribune, maybe the single must unusual thing being done online by any major newspaper. Col. Tribune is a fictional character created by the Tribune as a sort of host of and guide to the newspaper site and, more significantly, a participant in social networks like Facebook and Twitter (where the colonel has 5,400 followers). If nothing else, the colonel gives a somewhat drab news site a touch of personality.
Revised - News Story #5: Runaway Truck
People were injured in a freak accident when a runaway big-rig in an El Cerrito residential area destroyed cars, a house, left drivers trapped in their vehicles, and knocked power out for three cities.
On Moeser Lane, around 1:30 p.m., the 10-wheeler hauler snapped a power pole and badly damaged five vehicles before overturning and smashing into a house. This caused the power to go out in areas of El Cerrito, Richmond, and Berkeley.
A freak accident occurred on Moeser Lane in El Cerrito, around 1:30 p.m., when a runaway an asphalt truck in a residential area destroyed cars, a house, left drivers trapped in their vehicles, and knocked power out for three cities.
The 10-wheeler hauler snapped a power pole and badly damaged five vehicles before overturning and smashing into a house. This caused the power to go out in areas of El Cerrito, Richmond, and Berkeley.
El Cerrito police detective, Sgt. Shawn Maples heard cries coming from under the debris of the house and the truck. He and two of his colleagues found the driver lodged between two tires. Maples said, "We dragged him out in a heartbeat while the truck went up in flames. I just wanted to get him out of there."
Ruben Sharma, who lives across the street from the damaged house said, “First, I thought it was a major earthquake.” His front yard was littered with bricks, broken glass, car parts, and pieces of trees.
A man and a boy ended up stuck in their SUV in some shrubbery. Rescue workers had to slice open a Honda sedan, hit by the truck was so crumpled that the driver was trapped inside.
The driver, a San Jose man whose name was not released, broke both of his legs. He is listed in serious, but stable, condition at John Muir Medical Center.
On Moeser Lane, around 1:30 p.m., the 10-wheeler hauler snapped a power pole and badly damaged five vehicles before overturning and smashing into a house. This caused the power to go out in areas of El Cerrito, Richmond, and Berkeley.
A freak accident occurred on Moeser Lane in El Cerrito, around 1:30 p.m., when a runaway an asphalt truck in a residential area destroyed cars, a house, left drivers trapped in their vehicles, and knocked power out for three cities.
The 10-wheeler hauler snapped a power pole and badly damaged five vehicles before overturning and smashing into a house. This caused the power to go out in areas of El Cerrito, Richmond, and Berkeley.
El Cerrito police detective, Sgt. Shawn Maples heard cries coming from under the debris of the house and the truck. He and two of his colleagues found the driver lodged between two tires. Maples said, "We dragged him out in a heartbeat while the truck went up in flames. I just wanted to get him out of there."
Ruben Sharma, who lives across the street from the damaged house said, “First, I thought it was a major earthquake.” His front yard was littered with bricks, broken glass, car parts, and pieces of trees.
A man and a boy ended up stuck in their SUV in some shrubbery. Rescue workers had to slice open a Honda sedan, hit by the truck was so crumpled that the driver was trapped inside.
The driver, a San Jose man whose name was not released, broke both of his legs. He is listed in serious, but stable, condition at John Muir Medical Center.
Top News 5: AIDS blood sent to President Obama
Man charged with mailing HIV-tainted blood to President Obama
This is good news because out of the forty to fifty articles I scanned, this is the only one that intrigued me enough to spend more than 10 seconds on reading it. I found it on the Chicago Tribune website via Google news.
This is an important story because it discusses a possible assassination attempt on out President. In all honesty, I was expecting President Obama to be assassinated shortly after winning the Presidency. I just thought to myself, even thought America has grown so much in integrating races and cultures there are still a lot of people who don’t agree with civil rights and human equality; is it really that hard to assassinate someone who is constantly in the public eye?
This story is newsworthy because not only is it about the most prominent figure in the world, the President of the United States, but it is about a potential attempt to kill him. It just happened in December, but the press just caught wind of it this week, so the timeliness applies. This story is also slightly bizarre. We’ve had snipers, anthrax envelopes, and hijacked planes to harm and terrorize America. It is new for someone to mail their AIDS infected blood to the president; important, recent, weird.
This is good news because out of the forty to fifty articles I scanned, this is the only one that intrigued me enough to spend more than 10 seconds on reading it. I found it on the Chicago Tribune website via Google news.
This is an important story because it discusses a possible assassination attempt on out President. In all honesty, I was expecting President Obama to be assassinated shortly after winning the Presidency. I just thought to myself, even thought America has grown so much in integrating races and cultures there are still a lot of people who don’t agree with civil rights and human equality; is it really that hard to assassinate someone who is constantly in the public eye?
This story is newsworthy because not only is it about the most prominent figure in the world, the President of the United States, but it is about a potential attempt to kill him. It just happened in December, but the press just caught wind of it this week, so the timeliness applies. This story is also slightly bizarre. We’ve had snipers, anthrax envelopes, and hijacked planes to harm and terrorize America. It is new for someone to mail their AIDS infected blood to the president; important, recent, weird.
Revised - AP Stylebook exercise M-R
Justin Riray
2/28/09
JOUR 61A – AP Style Exercise (M-R)
(20 points)
1) He hopes to make a billion dollars by the time he’s 40 years old. Already, he figures his net worth is between $2 million and $3 million, depending on current stock prices. (3)
2) Lt. Cmdr. John Carpenter was a midshipman at the U.S. Naval Academy and served in the 7th Fleet. (4 pts. - this one's tricky, so give it some thought)
3) Twenty-one winners were named two days after the third annual Procrastination Awards ceremony. (3)
4) It was a one-sided game, and he was a poor loser. After losing the playoff when his ball went out of bounds, he made an off-color remark that could be heard in the stands. (4)
5) Hundreds of people attended Sunday’s race to watch 75 top bicyclists pedal across the finish line. (3)
6) Every winter, the Joneses and the Kinneys pore over travel brochures, planning their summer trip together. This year they’re hoping to go to Panama City, Fla. (3)
2/28/09
JOUR 61A – AP Style Exercise (M-R)
(20 points)
1) He hopes to make a billion dollars by the time he’s 40 years old. Already, he figures his net worth is between $2 million and $3 million, depending on current stock prices. (3)
2) Lt. Cmdr. John Carpenter was a midshipman at the U.S. Naval Academy and served in the 7th Fleet. (4 pts. - this one's tricky, so give it some thought)
3) Twenty-one winners were named two days after the third annual Procrastination Awards ceremony. (3)
4) It was a one-sided game, and he was a poor loser. After losing the playoff when his ball went out of bounds, he made an off-color remark that could be heard in the stands. (4)
5) Hundreds of people attended Sunday’s race to watch 75 top bicyclists pedal across the finish line. (3)
6) Every winter, the Joneses and the Kinneys pore over travel brochures, planning their summer trip together. This year they’re hoping to go to Panama City, Fla. (3)
Thursday, February 19, 2009
AP Stylebook Exercise I-L
1) The last time she played soccer, she received a serious injury to her knee. Sometimes, it’s hard to understand why she wants to keep playing.
2) He was indicted for an assault charge, but his lawyer said the case against him is circumstantial and she is sure the inquiry will exonerate him.
3) He knows it isn’t kosher, but green Jell-O is his favorite dessert. This admission has prompted his friends to question both his taste and his judgment.
4) Now that he has DSL, he finds it much easier to go online to check his e-mail and download files.
2) He was indicted for an assault charge, but his lawyer said the case against him is circumstantial and she is sure the inquiry will exonerate him.
3) He knows it isn’t kosher, but green Jell-O is his favorite dessert. This admission has prompted his friends to question both his taste and his judgment.
4) Now that he has DSL, he finds it much easier to go online to check his e-mail and download files.
Revised - Two Feature Leads: An Alarming Event
TULSA, Okla.- Here's a formula they don't teach you in chemistry class: a 95-year-old’s birthday + 95 candles on birthday cake = firefighters to the rescue.
That's what happened when a women's group at the First United Methodist Church decided to throw a birthday party for 95-year-old Mabel McCullough. Of course, there were 95 candles on her cake.
“There wasn’t an inch to spare. By the time we had them all lit, it looked like a torch.” explained guest, Eddi Carlin. With some help from her friends, McCullough blew them all out.
The result: a big cloud of smoke set off a smoke alarm that quickly brought five fire engines, two ladder trucks and 25 firemen to the church.
Fire Chief Lonnie Lamb exclaimed, “In my 23 years on the job, I’ve seen a lot of things set off a fire alarm, but I don’t think I’ve ever heard of one going off because of a birthday cake.” The firefighters did not stick around to have some cake, but they did have their pictures taken with the 95-year-old celebrant.
That's what happened when a women's group at the First United Methodist Church decided to throw a birthday party for 95-year-old Mabel McCullough. Of course, there were 95 candles on her cake.
“There wasn’t an inch to spare. By the time we had them all lit, it looked like a torch.” explained guest, Eddi Carlin. With some help from her friends, McCullough blew them all out.
The result: a big cloud of smoke set off a smoke alarm that quickly brought five fire engines, two ladder trucks and 25 firemen to the church.
Fire Chief Lonnie Lamb exclaimed, “In my 23 years on the job, I’ve seen a lot of things set off a fire alarm, but I don’t think I’ve ever heard of one going off because of a birthday cake.” The firefighters did not stick around to have some cake, but they did have their pictures taken with the 95-year-old celebrant.
Revised - News Story #4: Just Married, Nearly Carjacked
Just Married, Nearly Carjacked
Hours after their wedding, a couple was almost carjacked outside a Taco Bell on East Fourth Street in San Mateo, late last night. The suspect was high on methamphetamines for three days straight, say police.
San Mateo County spokesperson, Sheryl Wolcott explained that the couple stopped for a late-night snack still sporting a tuxedo and wedding dress during the incident. Shortly after the groom got out of the car, Alan Ticas-Soto jumped into the driver's seat, but had trouble getting the car into reverse. The 22-year-old bride began to scream and opened the passenger door and stumbled out of the car just in time, shaken but uninjured.
Alan Ticas-Soto clumsily crashed the couple’s car into the Taco Bell sign then ran off after jumping into the driver’s seat immediately after the groom got out of the idly-running car.
Police caught the suspect shortly after he ran from the scene on South Delaware Street and Ninth Avenue. Ticas-Soto is facing felony carjacking and misdemeanor drug charges.
Hours after their wedding, a couple was almost carjacked outside a Taco Bell on East Fourth Street in San Mateo, late last night. The suspect was high on methamphetamines for three days straight, say police.
San Mateo County spokesperson, Sheryl Wolcott explained that the couple stopped for a late-night snack still sporting a tuxedo and wedding dress during the incident. Shortly after the groom got out of the car, Alan Ticas-Soto jumped into the driver's seat, but had trouble getting the car into reverse. The 22-year-old bride began to scream and opened the passenger door and stumbled out of the car just in time, shaken but uninjured.
Alan Ticas-Soto clumsily crashed the couple’s car into the Taco Bell sign then ran off after jumping into the driver’s seat immediately after the groom got out of the idly-running car.
Police caught the suspect shortly after he ran from the scene on South Delaware Street and Ninth Avenue. Ticas-Soto is facing felony carjacking and misdemeanor drug charges.
Revised - News Story #3: San Francisco neighborhood Upset
Gas Pipe Rupture Disturbs Hundreds of San Francisco Residents
A ruptured gas pipe disrupted the day for hundreds of people near Folsom and 11th. From about noon to 5 p.m., yesterday, over 100 people were forced to leave the area south of Market, including residents, business owners and their customers.
A PG&E employee said a private construction crew was trying to repair sewer lines when they severed a two-inch, high-pressure, underground gas pipe in the process. The mishap also forced traffic to a halt on the heavily traveled roads.
Crocker’s Lockers manager, Carlann Lauria grumbled, “Ask my customers. They were pretty irate.” The employees had to go outside police perimeter to collect payment checks from customers.
Wa-Ha-Ka restaurant manager, Samantha Feldman stated that her employees and patrons were forced to leave resulting in a loss of about $500 worth of business due to the abrupt shutdown.
A ruptured gas pipe disrupted the day for hundreds of people near Folsom and 11th. From about noon to 5 p.m., yesterday, over 100 people were forced to leave the area south of Market, including residents, business owners and their customers.
A PG&E employee said a private construction crew was trying to repair sewer lines when they severed a two-inch, high-pressure, underground gas pipe in the process. The mishap also forced traffic to a halt on the heavily traveled roads.
Crocker’s Lockers manager, Carlann Lauria grumbled, “Ask my customers. They were pretty irate.” The employees had to go outside police perimeter to collect payment checks from customers.
Wa-Ha-Ka restaurant manager, Samantha Feldman stated that her employees and patrons were forced to leave resulting in a loss of about $500 worth of business due to the abrupt shutdown.
Top News 4: Our Pictures Belong to Facebook.com
Facebook backs down
I heard about the new facebook.com policy: all pictures uploaded by facebook.com users are owned by Facebook. As expected, this generated a huge outrage by thousands of account owners. There is a Facebook group against the new policy that is 35,000 strong and growing. This week, Facebook took back the policy for the time being, allowing for a trial-like period to discuss the new rule.
Facebook, aside from Myspace is the most popular social networking website in the United States, so it should be ruled democratically. This story has several newsworthy aspects to it. The impact on American internet users is huge; to have their pictures become the property of a extremely large and global website is stripping them of their privacy. One of the reasons Facebook is more prolific than Myspace is because of its more private security options. By Facebook declaring that all uploaded pictures belong to them, their reputation does a 180.
This has been going on for less than a couple weeks, so the timeliness and currency are still applicable, especially because there is still a good possibility that they will return the policy. Facebook is very prominent, being a household name for kids, teens, and even adults. Lastly, this has become somewhat of a social, daresay a political, conflict between Facebook and its users. I’m surprised I have not seen any of this on a front page.
I heard about the new facebook.com policy: all pictures uploaded by facebook.com users are owned by Facebook. As expected, this generated a huge outrage by thousands of account owners. There is a Facebook group against the new policy that is 35,000 strong and growing. This week, Facebook took back the policy for the time being, allowing for a trial-like period to discuss the new rule.
Facebook, aside from Myspace is the most popular social networking website in the United States, so it should be ruled democratically. This story has several newsworthy aspects to it. The impact on American internet users is huge; to have their pictures become the property of a extremely large and global website is stripping them of their privacy. One of the reasons Facebook is more prolific than Myspace is because of its more private security options. By Facebook declaring that all uploaded pictures belong to them, their reputation does a 180.
This has been going on for less than a couple weeks, so the timeliness and currency are still applicable, especially because there is still a good possibility that they will return the policy. Facebook is very prominent, being a household name for kids, teens, and even adults. Lastly, this has become somewhat of a social, daresay a political, conflict between Facebook and its users. I’m surprised I have not seen any of this on a front page.
Saturday, February 14, 2009
Revised - News story #2: Robbed at Gunpoint
A Chinese tourist couple was robbed at gunpoint in the Saint Mary’s Cathedral parking lot in San Francisco. Sgt. Lawrence Price of the SFPD explained the incident.
WeiMing Chen, 28, and his wife Li Lu, 30, left their tour group around 10 a.m. to take photos from the cathedral’s lower parking lot. Then, a man approached them, waving a pistol and demanding money. Chen handed over about $100, but the thief wanted more. Chen, then, gave his Visa card, their passports, camera, and airline tickets. Finally, the suspect ran off.
Police are currently on the look out for the perpetrator. The victims later said he was wearing a black jacket and cap. Chen described their robber as looking about 18 years old.
It is unclear if Chen and Lu made their 1 p.m. flight back to Taipei. The entire tour group, about 30 employees of a Taiwan airline, were scheduled to depart on that flight.
Sgt. Lawrence Price of the SFPD identified the victims; WeiMing Chen, 28, and his wife Li Lu, 30.
WeiMing Chen, 28, and his wife Li Lu, 30, left their tour group around 10 a.m. to take photos from the cathedral’s lower parking lot. Then, a man approached them, waving a pistol and demanding money. Chen handed over about $100, but the thief wanted more. Chen, then, gave his Visa card, their passports, camera, and airline tickets. Finally, the suspect ran off.
Police are currently on the look out for the perpetrator. The victims later said he was wearing a black jacket and cap. Chen described their robber as looking about 18 years old.
It is unclear if Chen and Lu made their 1 p.m. flight back to Taipei. The entire tour group, about 30 employees of a Taiwan airline, were scheduled to depart on that flight.
Sgt. Lawrence Price of the SFPD identified the victims; WeiMing Chen, 28, and his wife Li Lu, 30.
Revised - News Story #1: Undetected Smoke
A retired man was very badly burned, yesterday, from a fire in his house that did not have a smoke detector. Robert Kent was rescued from his burning San Jose home.
Kent had second and third-degree burns on half of his body after being found unconscious on the kitchen floor, surrounded by flames. In his single-story home on Annapolis Way the fire began in the kitchen and spread to the attic. The fire was reported around 3 p.m.
Firefighters rescued Kent from his smoke-filled house. There was no smoke detection system in the building. He is currently in grave condition at Valley Medical Center.
Kent had second and third-degree burns on half of his body after being found unconscious on the kitchen floor, surrounded by flames. In his single-story home on Annapolis Way the fire began in the kitchen and spread to the attic. The fire was reported around 3 p.m.
Firefighters rescued Kent from his smoke-filled house. There was no smoke detection system in the building. He is currently in grave condition at Valley Medical Center.
Copy Edit the World #1: McCune
News Story 2 assignment
1st paragraph: "...working on a sotry..."
It should be: "story"
2nd paragraph: "...a couple of tourist..."
It should say: "a couple of tourists"
Top News assignment from Prof. McCune
4th Paragraph: "You ask to Sheryl Wolcott..."
It should say: "You ask Sheryl Wolcott"
Two Feature Leads - McCune
2nd to last paragraph: “‘In my 23 years on the job, I’ve seen a lot of thing set off a fire alarm…’”
It should be: “I’ve seen a lot of things set off a fire alarm”
Even though this isn't, really, published work, may it count for points?
My first one is of Mrs. McCune's assignment jour61 website.
It reads "the boywas found," but should say "the boy was found."
And the second one is a picture of a menu in an Asian boba cafe called "Quickly" that reads "We made fresh Who care? We do!"
It should say "We make fresh! Who cares? We do!"
1st paragraph: "...working on a sotry..."
It should be: "story"
2nd paragraph: "...a couple of tourist..."
It should say: "a couple of tourists"
Top News assignment from Prof. McCune
4th Paragraph: "You ask to Sheryl Wolcott..."
It should say: "You ask Sheryl Wolcott"
Two Feature Leads - McCune
2nd to last paragraph: “‘In my 23 years on the job, I’ve seen a lot of thing set off a fire alarm…’”
It should be: “I’ve seen a lot of things set off a fire alarm”
Even though this isn't, really, published work, may it count for points?
My first one is of Mrs. McCune's assignment jour61 website.
It reads "the boywas found," but should say "the boy was found."
And the second one is a picture of a menu in an Asian boba cafe called "Quickly" that reads "We made fresh Who care? We do!"
It should say "We make fresh! Who cares? We do!"
Thursday, February 12, 2009
Top News 3: Chris Brown beats Rihanna
Chris Brown’s Violence
Rihanna is Fine
I know this is celebrity news, but it is HUGE! Chris Brown has, for sure, beat up his girlfriend, Rihanna. All the other details about why and how probably won’t be cleared up until they issue a public statement; but even that will, most likely, be a twisted truth or a complete lie.
This is much more important than your normal celebrity scandal. Brown is only 19-years-old and Rihanna is just a year older. They are the two most angelic and successful role models and heartthrobs for America’s teens. Domestic violence happens everywhere, and it happens a lot. Now, it has been illustrated by America’s most venerated young celebrity couple.
What makes this news is mostly the prominence of the two star’s names and the conflict between the two. Timeliness is also a good factor in this story’s newsworthiness. This is not literally bizarre, but is was such a shock to have two kids with pristine reputations at the top of their careers fall so far.
Rihanna is Fine
I know this is celebrity news, but it is HUGE! Chris Brown has, for sure, beat up his girlfriend, Rihanna. All the other details about why and how probably won’t be cleared up until they issue a public statement; but even that will, most likely, be a twisted truth or a complete lie.
This is much more important than your normal celebrity scandal. Brown is only 19-years-old and Rihanna is just a year older. They are the two most angelic and successful role models and heartthrobs for America’s teens. Domestic violence happens everywhere, and it happens a lot. Now, it has been illustrated by America’s most venerated young celebrity couple.
What makes this news is mostly the prominence of the two star’s names and the conflict between the two. Timeliness is also a good factor in this story’s newsworthiness. This is not literally bizarre, but is was such a shock to have two kids with pristine reputations at the top of their careers fall so far.
Revised - AP Stylebook Exercise E-H
1. His new book on elections and the Electoral College is titled, “Does your Vote Count?”
2. Brianna looked so sad that he wanted to envelop her in his arms and give her a big hug; but he was afraid the attention might faze her.
3. They were so impressed by her flair for decorating that they offered wonderful praise and agreed to distribute her promotional flier.
4. He suspected his neighbor was selling drugs, so he called the FBI. His neighbor, however, cried foul at the accusation.
5. The boys’ stories didn’t jibe, so their father threw down the gauntlet and demanded the truth.
6. My great-grandfather is a real gourmet, so I always let him pick the wine whenever we have dinner.
2. Brianna looked so sad that he wanted to envelop her in his arms and give her a big hug; but he was afraid the attention might faze her.
3. They were so impressed by her flair for decorating that they offered wonderful praise and agreed to distribute her promotional flier.
4. He suspected his neighbor was selling drugs, so he called the FBI. His neighbor, however, cried foul at the accusation.
5. The boys’ stories didn’t jibe, so their father threw down the gauntlet and demanded the truth.
6. My great-grandfather is a real gourmet, so I always let him pick the wine whenever we have dinner.
Saturday, February 7, 2009
Revised - AP Style Exercise A-D
1. Mayor Richard Wrigley expressed confidence that the gubernatorial debate, which begins at 7:30 p.m., will have a positive effect on his candidacy. He stated, “Governor Red Davidson is a master of dirty politics, but I won’t take any of his baloney.”
2. For her birthday, the 9-year-old girl invited five good friends over for ice cream and cake. The chocolate cake was so good that any one of the children could have eaten it all, yet they carefully divided it among themselves.
3. Convinced of the bill’s importance, members of the Democratic and Republican Parties came together on Capitol Hill to support anti-terrorism legislation, despite their differences on other issues.
4. ROME – All around the world today, Roman Catholics listened as the pope delivered his homily.
2. For her birthday, the 9-year-old girl invited five good friends over for ice cream and cake. The chocolate cake was so good that any one of the children could have eaten it all, yet they carefully divided it among themselves.
3. Convinced of the bill’s importance, members of the Democratic and Republican Parties came together on Capitol Hill to support anti-terrorism legislation, despite their differences on other issues.
4. ROME – All around the world today, Roman Catholics listened as the pope delivered his homily.
Top News Story 2: 19-year old Boy Runs Neighbor Over
San Jose Woman run over by a neighbor called a community hero
I found this tragic event posted on the Mercury news online site. First of all, the title of the article is very misleading. As I read the story I realized that the victim of the incident was called a community hero, but the title makes it sound like the person that ran her over is the hero. So, of course I was very interested to read about this so called hero’s violent act. Most people would be quite intrigued by the downfall of a good person; they would read this story.
The story happens to be a bad ending to a very common situation. I’m sure most of us know a reckless teenager that illegally drives because parents don’t keep a close enough eye on the teen. With this specific teen, he ran over and killed his neighbor; horrifically ending her life and causing pain to his and her family.
Besides the obvious misinterpretation , this story is newsworthy because of the impact is has on the community. A good woman had been struck and killed by her 19-year old neighbor who did not even have a driver’s license. This is also bizarre that an illegal driver committed the crime. This happened less than a month ago, so the timeliness is still good.
I found this tragic event posted on the Mercury news online site. First of all, the title of the article is very misleading. As I read the story I realized that the victim of the incident was called a community hero, but the title makes it sound like the person that ran her over is the hero. So, of course I was very interested to read about this so called hero’s violent act. Most people would be quite intrigued by the downfall of a good person; they would read this story.
The story happens to be a bad ending to a very common situation. I’m sure most of us know a reckless teenager that illegally drives because parents don’t keep a close enough eye on the teen. With this specific teen, he ran over and killed his neighbor; horrifically ending her life and causing pain to his and her family.
Besides the obvious misinterpretation , this story is newsworthy because of the impact is has on the community. A good woman had been struck and killed by her 19-year old neighbor who did not even have a driver’s license. This is also bizarre that an illegal driver committed the crime. This happened less than a month ago, so the timeliness is still good.
Friday, February 6, 2009
Revised - Leads 5
Fact Set #1: Pipe Fitter
Immediate Identification:
Duane La Chance, 55, a pipe fitter at the Springfield Municipal Power Plant, accidentally touched a power line carrying 15,000 volts with a piece of iron that put him in serious condition with third-degree burns.
Delayed Identification:
A pipe fitter employee from the Springfield Municipal Power Plant is in critical condition at the Springfield Hospital after suffering third-degree burns from being electrocuted by a 15,000 volt power line with a piece of angle iron.
Fact Set #2: Car Accident
Immediate identification:
Wayne Clay, 19, drove his car across the center line going north on U.S. 63 near Blue Ridge Road and collided with a Ford Focus driven by 20-year old James W. Cunning.
Delayed identification:
A teen driver crosses the center line of U.S. 63 and struck the vehicle of a 20-year old male’s car at 11:45am today. The victim is currently at Springfield Hospital.
Immediate Identification:
Duane La Chance, 55, a pipe fitter at the Springfield Municipal Power Plant, accidentally touched a power line carrying 15,000 volts with a piece of iron that put him in serious condition with third-degree burns.
Delayed Identification:
A pipe fitter employee from the Springfield Municipal Power Plant is in critical condition at the Springfield Hospital after suffering third-degree burns from being electrocuted by a 15,000 volt power line with a piece of angle iron.
Fact Set #2: Car Accident
Immediate identification:
Wayne Clay, 19, drove his car across the center line going north on U.S. 63 near Blue Ridge Road and collided with a Ford Focus driven by 20-year old James W. Cunning.
Delayed identification:
A teen driver crosses the center line of U.S. 63 and struck the vehicle of a 20-year old male’s car at 11:45am today. The victim is currently at Springfield Hospital.
Revised - Leads 4
4a.
A landing tower employee claimed he spotted smoke near the wheels of the Northwest Airlines passenger jet, Flight 428. The 40 passengers were evacuated after the sign of possible danger.
The plane landed at the LaCrosse Municipal Airport in Wisconsin, today, following a flight from Minneapolis.
4b.
A 7-year old boy who has been missing for three years was found thanks to a tip from a neighbor from Brick Township, NJ, who had seen the boy’s picture in a movie.
On Thursday night, a local pedestrian saw the movie, Adam: The Song Continues, and recognized the boy in a picture and called the police. This tip led to the recovery of the boy and the arrest of his mother, Ellen Lynn Conner, 27, who is facing charges of kidnapping and interference with a custody warrant.
A landing tower employee claimed he spotted smoke near the wheels of the Northwest Airlines passenger jet, Flight 428. The 40 passengers were evacuated after the sign of possible danger.
The plane landed at the LaCrosse Municipal Airport in Wisconsin, today, following a flight from Minneapolis.
4b.
A 7-year old boy who has been missing for three years was found thanks to a tip from a neighbor from Brick Township, NJ, who had seen the boy’s picture in a movie.
On Thursday night, a local pedestrian saw the movie, Adam: The Song Continues, and recognized the boy in a picture and called the police. This tip led to the recovery of the boy and the arrest of his mother, Ellen Lynn Conner, 27, who is facing charges of kidnapping and interference with a custody warrant.
Revised - Leads 3
Four trains collided at 1:30 p.m. yesterday. Larry Chase, Amtrak spokesman, said that Amtrak and Conrail’s trains were headed northbound when the Conrails ran a stop sign leading to a collision between the trains.
Saturday, January 31, 2009
Revised - Leads 2
131 people were killed in a fiery crash aboard a US airplane coming from Chicago; the worst US disaster in three years. Outside Pittsburgh yesterday, the plane violently smashed into the ground upon descending.
Revised - Leads 1
Lead #1: A local couple was awarded $150,000, at the butte County Court, yesterday, as compensation for injuries they suffered from in an auto accident in March.
Lead #2: The Sierras still to be engulfed by another flurry in this series of snowstorms.
Lead #3: Three firefighters were injured today as they turned a potential tragedy into a miracle. Earlier today, three firefighters successfully rescued all 41 families from a 6-story building fire on Union ave.
comment: Hi Prof. McCune! I was just wondering, in my broadcast class I was taught not to use "yesterday" in leads because it's already old news. Is that the same for newspaper leads? I'm guessing not, because most of the news will come from yesterday. And, also, if the facts for the leads say they took place "today" does that mean we write "today" in the lead, or yesterday? Thank you!
Lead #2: The Sierras still to be engulfed by another flurry in this series of snowstorms.
Lead #3: Three firefighters were injured today as they turned a potential tragedy into a miracle. Earlier today, three firefighters successfully rescued all 41 families from a 6-story building fire on Union ave.
comment: Hi Prof. McCune! I was just wondering, in my broadcast class I was taught not to use "yesterday" in leads because it's already old news. Is that the same for newspaper leads? I'm guessing not, because most of the news will come from yesterday. And, also, if the facts for the leads say they took place "today" does that mean we write "today" in the lead, or yesterday? Thank you!
QUESTION: tab? space? new paragraph?!
To Whom it May Concern,
I cannot figure out how to indent a new paragraph on my blogger posts. If I press tab it sends my cursor to the tags box, if I manually make ten spaces before I begin typing those spaces do not show up when I publish the post. Does anyone know how?
I cannot figure out how to indent a new paragraph on my blogger posts. If I press tab it sends my cursor to the tags box, if I manually make ten spaces before I begin typing those spaces do not show up when I publish the post. Does anyone know how?
Top News 1: Whoops, Octuplets!
Accidental Octuplets
I rarely have time to read the newspaper in the morning; though, when I do read it, I'm reading about the Warriors latest upset, or miraculous win. So, in order to supplement my current events knowledge I spend about half an hour, before I go to sleep, two or three times a week reading the latest in Google.com news.
So, tonight, I stumbled upon a woman who loves kids and 'accidentally' gave birth to octuplets (if you're confused, yes, that means eight babies at once). She tried to have another child through a sperm donor and embryo implant to try for one more girl, but, amazingly, rapid-fired eight children out simultaneously.
This story is important because it addresses how pregnancy assistance can cause unwanted results. More importantly, Nadya Suleman became only the second person in the United States to give birth to eight babies at once!
The timeliness makes this newsworthy because it happened this week; yet, the main reason this is such an interesting story is the bizarre factor. A human female octuplets is one of the most unusual topics you will ever find in a newspaper.
I rarely have time to read the newspaper in the morning; though, when I do read it, I'm reading about the Warriors latest upset, or miraculous win. So, in order to supplement my current events knowledge I spend about half an hour, before I go to sleep, two or three times a week reading the latest in Google.com news.
So, tonight, I stumbled upon a woman who loves kids and 'accidentally' gave birth to octuplets (if you're confused, yes, that means eight babies at once). She tried to have another child through a sperm donor and embryo implant to try for one more girl, but, amazingly, rapid-fired eight children out simultaneously.
This story is important because it addresses how pregnancy assistance can cause unwanted results. More importantly, Nadya Suleman became only the second person in the United States to give birth to eight babies at once!
The timeliness makes this newsworthy because it happened this week; yet, the main reason this is such an interesting story is the bizarre factor. A human female octuplets is one of the most unusual topics you will ever find in a newspaper.
Saturday, January 24, 2009
206 Bones into 200 Words
I am Justin Riray, a JMC student in my 3rd year of college, 2nd semester here are SJSU. To learn about my personality and life during high school, feel free to check my adolescence, to learn about my college life, talk to me when you see me, to view a fraction of my creative outlet check out my life through video clips.
Writing and media have always tickled my ticklish fancy. I am still not sure about what I want to major in, exactly, but I've always leaned towards Journalism and writing for public media. I hope to learn the 'advanced basics' of professional and leisure writing from this class.
What interests me most about media is how normal people get so addicted to certain parts of it, such as TV, video games, music, or even a certain celebrity, and perhaps, even addicted to non-celebrities through myspace or youtube. I've always wanted to be able to harness the power of what get's people addicted. Not in a bad way--it just fascinates me how I can see certain formulas for media that surely catch people's attention.
Writing and media have always tickled my ticklish fancy. I am still not sure about what I want to major in, exactly, but I've always leaned towards Journalism and writing for public media. I hope to learn the 'advanced basics' of professional and leisure writing from this class.
What interests me most about media is how normal people get so addicted to certain parts of it, such as TV, video games, music, or even a certain celebrity, and perhaps, even addicted to non-celebrities through myspace or youtube. I've always wanted to be able to harness the power of what get's people addicted. Not in a bad way--it just fascinates me how I can see certain formulas for media that surely catch people's attention.
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