Copy Edit the World #1: McCune

News Story 2 assignment

1st paragraph: "...working on a sotry..."

It should be: "story"


2nd paragraph: "...a couple of tourist..."

It should say: "a couple of tourists"



Top News assignment from Prof. McCune

4th Paragraph: "You ask to Sheryl Wolcott..."

It should say: "You ask Sheryl Wolcott"


Two Feature Leads - McCune

2nd to last paragraph: “‘In my 23 years on the job, I’ve seen a lot of thing set off a fire alarm…’”

It should be: “I’ve seen a lot of things set off a fire alarm”


Even though this isn't, really, published work, may it count for points?



My first one is of Mrs. McCune's assignment jour61 website.
It reads "the boywas found," but should say "the boy was found."

And the second one is a picture of a menu in an Asian boba cafe called "Quickly" that reads "We made fresh Who care? We do!"

It should say "We make fresh! Who cares? We do!"