Friday, March 20, 2009

Revised - Real Life Reporting - Educational Psychology

California College Students lack Motivation

The California college system, and perhaps the rest of The United States, have failed to successfully motivate students to perform to their full potential according to Roxana Marichi, Ph.D., educational psychologist.

“When students get a tangible reward, like good grades or a top spot in a class, it actually makes them less motivated,” says Marachi.

The college system is based on grades and students are rewarded and valued by rank. This is not the way to motivate us to succeed.

Marachi, San Jose State’s assistant professor of the college of education, led a workshop for teachers and staff about how to better motivate students. The session took place at San Jose State in IRC 101 on March 3 at 1:00 p.m.

It was a smaller classroom that seemed to be at full capacity with only 12 of us there. The seating was meeting room styled with everyone in a circle; a setting that encourages equality between teachers and students.

The basis of the meeting focused on healthy learning versus unhealthy learning. Marachi explained that, behaviorism, on of the oldest learning theories, actually has nothing to do with learning.

For students, grades become the prize at the end. Students learn to work solely for a reward. This works for a short period of time, but is detrimental to their work ethic in the long run.

SJSU e-Campus blackboard.com administrator, Mark Adams said that the top performers in their field “spent an enormous amount of time in practice; they also enjoyed practice.”

The best way to learn is to learn for the sake of learning, and not to pass the class.

Engineering professor, Jacob Tsao, Ph.D., brought up a discussion on what student, Justin Riray, likes to call, “the cemetery syndrome,” in which the entire class seems dead. Tsao said that on a regular basis, he would ask the class a question and not a single hand would raise. Marachi reminded us that it is the teachers responsibility to make the subject matter seem interesting and useful to the students.

Marachi explained the expectancy - value theory of motivation; multiply what the learner expects to learn by the value of the material to calculate their motivation level. “This is a multiplicative model, it is not additive,” Marachi said.

“If one of them is zero, then they are all zero.”

It was discussed that if a student believes they will do well, but is not at all interested in the subject, or visa versa, then they will have zero motivation.

Dennis Hungridge, M.A., a human resources workforce planning manager reminded us how the U.S. has built itself on opposite values from the rest of the world.

“The cultural myth of the United States is working hard; not education,” claimed Hungridge.
While Europe and most of Asia founded their worth on knowledge and learning in order to succeed, the United States has founded it’s values on working hard.

Since society has taught this generation to work for short term goals, they have developed short term motivation. People give up to easily. Failing just one class could completely hinder a student’s full potential, because they are likely label themselves a failure from then on.

Marichi advised that students have to learn to love school for the sake of increasing out knowledge and preparing themselves for life using the tools offered to us by teachers. People also need to be optimistic about difficult trials and failures.

Michael Jordan was cut from his high school basketball team.

Jordan once observed, “I’ve failed over and over again in my life.”

“That is why I succeed.”

-Justin Riray, SJSU Journalism Major

Thursday, March 12, 2009

Libel? Playing Editor!

Play editor! Read the following draft of a college newspaper story and determine if it contains any passages that are libelous. If you believe you have found a libelous passage, describe the passage and why you believe it is libelous. Then briefly explain what you would need to do to fix it -- or what you would need to omit -- before running the story. (Or would you run it at all?)

Here's the draft to review for libel:

A sophomore at Springfield University claims a chemistry professor has sexually harassed her.

Karen Hart, 123 Hill Hall, says the professor, George O.T. Jungle, has touched her during tutoring sessions in his office and has invited her to his apartment several times. She said she declined his invitations.

"I am having trouble in the class and I have to go see him to get help with my papers and projects," Hart said. "But I am scared to go in his office now."

Jungle denied having an improper contact with the student and threatened this newspaper with a libel suit if it published the story.

Hart said she is thinking of filing a formal complaint with the university.

"I don't know how to do that," she said. "I don't know what to do."


This is perfect, I am currently taking Mass Communications Law, Mcom 101.
So, I’ll give my expert opinion!
First of all, for a statement to be labeled “actionable libel” it MUST be false. So, I cannot be truly sure about whether or not the statements are libelous or not because I do not know if they are true. So, I’ll do my best.
The first sentence is libelous is it is a false statement or if whoever gathered that information from Karen made the news gatherer promise confidentiality--to not repeat or publish what she told him or her.
This is on the verge of libel, but it is not. The writer makes a good move by always including “she said,” in the statements. But still, this is too detailed to release to the public considering she hasn’t even filed a formal complaint.
It is not libelous, but it is stupid to write a story without reasonable proof. Just hearing this news from a student is not enough.
I would omit the parts in the second paragraph about Jungle touching her or inviting her to his apartment. Also, in the fourth paragraph the use of the word “threatened” has a very negative connotation. I would either omit that sentence, or at least not use “threatened.”
The entire piece seems like it was meant to ruin Jungle’s reputation, which is one of the characteristics of a libelous publication.
Overall, this is very libelous, but I am not sure if it would be labeled completely libelous in court. I would have to know more about the truth of the statements Hart and Jungle made.
If I were the editor, I would leave it a short, impersonal article and not name the teacher. However, if Hart told my reporter that she wanted to be named, then I would name her.

Copy edit the World #3 (extra)


This is from my Cases in Communications book by Zelezny.
The sentence reads: Respondent publishes American Opinion, a monthly outlet for the views of the John Birth Society.
This is a GFE: It should be "the John Birch Society"


Didn't get to take a picture of it, but in the "One and Done for SJSU" sports article in the Wednesday March 11th, 2009 issue of the Spartan Daily there was a GFE!
Under the picture it named "Chastity Shavers" but in the scoring chart it read: "C. Shaver"
So, I am not sure which one is wrong, but one of them is!




This is from one of my sister's high school text books. I can get the name of it if you would like me to, but she's in school right now and isn't texting me back.
The sentence, show in two consistent pictures, is: Your purpose to kill me.
That isn't a complete sentence. It should say: Your purpose is to kill me.


It says " ... student that is majoring in broadcast journalism who shown ... "
It should say " ... who has shown ... "


My next three corrections come from this book.


IEE should be IIE for the Institute of International Education.



From Edward R. Murrow..., there should be commas before and after the word "officially" and it should read: Although, officially, its assistant director ...


This is also from Edward R. Murrow and the Birth of Broadcast Journalism by Bob Edwards. It should be written as: Alger Hiss'



Hapiness should read: Happiness. Plus, I have no idea why all those words are capitalized. I found this in a newspaper back home in Pittsburg. It was probably the Contra Costa Times classifieds.

Ethical Decision Making

Scenario 1

You are interviewing a high government official about her involvement in a bribery scheme, when she is called out of her office. While alone, you notice some documents on her desk that appear to be related to your investigation.

Would you read them? Take them? Ask her
about them when she returns?

I would ask her about them when she returns, most likely. However, if it were a story that I was very passionate about and I felt like the government was keeping a bad secret from the American public I might take a peek at them, but it would have to be on a day that I am feeling extra brave and risky.
Also, it wouldn’t be the disrespect of personal privacy that would keep me away from looking at the papers. It would be fear of being caught snooping. I’m just being honest. I for sure wouldn’t just take them; that is plain stupid. She would ask where the hell her papers went, then I’d be caught, and screwed.
I am aware that it would be a breach of privacy, or illegal interception of classified documents, but I still say there would be a one percent chance I’d go for a quick glance. That means I’d have a one percent chance of serving jail time and would have to kiss my career goodbye.



Scenario 2

Conditions at a local nursing home are known to be substandard. It’s privately owned, and efforts to gain admittance or information have failed. Your editor asks you to get a job as an orderly and write a story based on your first-hand experiences.

Would you do it? Why or why not?

I would love to, unfortunately I wouldn’t want to do any undercover reporting that had to do with grubby situations. I would only go undercover for positive, or fun stories. Being an undercover reporter to uncover an individual’s or a company’s mistakes and incorrect activities is like going up to a police officer and punching them in the face; you’re just asking to be thrown in prison.


Scenario 3

You are writing a feature story and find some excellent quotes about your subject from another written source.

– May you use those quotes as if you
obtained them yourself, or must you
credit the other written source?
– What if you obtained the quotes from a
web site?

Of course I would cite the paper, magazine, or website I got it from. I would cite the author of the article or piece I took the quotes from. Even though it is nice to be the first to come up with a news story, I am very sure readers don’t subtract points from an article just for citing information from another article.
In fact, most news stories come from information from wire services or other newspapers or websites. So, there is nothing to be ashamed of about quoting another journalistic source.
Definitely, always, quote anything that you did not come up with, yourself.

My Fog Index is 12.7

Fog Index test

Excerpt from “The Future of News: That’s us”
95 words

Why shouldn’t we just sit back and perform the way all of our college textbooks instruct us to? If anyone thinks news is just delivering facts, and that it is a piece of cake, the truth is that creativity and organizational skills need to be of the highest caliber in order to stay with the ever-changing world. We are all striving to play a part in the future of news, so damn right this business is competitive. Writers pull-over, because up and coming journalists are equipped with so much more than a pencil and paper.


Average words per sentence: 23.75

“Hard” word count: 8

23.75 + 8 = 31.75

31.75 x 0.4 = 12.7

My Fog Index = 12.7

First of all, I learned what a Fog Index is. At first I thought it would be some stupid, useless way to rate writing. But it is in fact, an almost perfect way of calculating the readability of my written content.
It is nice to know to shoot for a Fog Index of eight. I think, recently, I have been writing at a fog index of 14, even when I do my best to simplify things.
This was very interesting; I’m pretty sure I will remember how to calculate the Fog Index for the rest of my life; or at least until I become a retired, senile journalist.

I have one question. Do hyphenated words count as one or two words? Because I had two hyphenated words in my excerpt. Just wondering. Thank you!

Got what it takes to be a Reporter? Apparently, I do.

Talent

1. I enjoy reading. I consume a lot of books and magazines.
-Not True.

2. For me, writing is rewarding. And I am confident that people genuinely enjoy the stuff I write.
-Mostly True.

3. I don’t pay much attention to spelling.
-Not True.

4. I’m generally adept at computer technology.
-Mostly True.

5. I can organize my ideas and write quickly when I need to.
-Mostly True.

6. I’d make a good game show contestant because I’m pretty good at remembering facts and trivia.
-Mostly True

7. I am efficient and self-sufficient when it comes to doing extensive library research.
-Mostly True.

Temperament

8. I’m generally more curious than most people I know.
-Mostly True.

9. In public situations, I’m pretty shy.
-FALSE

10. I think it’s unpatriotic to question or criticize our government.
-Not True. … umm, democracy. Duh.

11. When I choose a career, I’ll require a stable 9-to-5 job where my workday is routine and I make big money.
-Not True.

12. If I really want something, I’m tenacious until I get it.
-Not True.

13. When I’m under pressure, I can keep my cool and stay focused without losing my temper.
-Mostly True (when it comes to work and school)

14. When strangers or teachers criticize what I write, it really bugs me.
-Not True.

Total Points:
0 + 3 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 2 + 2 = 12
3 + 2 + 1 + 3 + 3 + 1 + 2 = 15
12 + 15 = 27


I think that this was a pretty fun and practical reporter test. Still, it seems way to easy to answer these questions in favor of the ‘right’ answers. I answered every question truthfully, unfortunately I doubt that I am “27 out of 30,” for my reporter potential.
The test did teach me a few things about being a reporter, or at least reminded me of certain concepts. Still, I don’t think reading the examples of rough situations really makes me feel the stress I would truly feel as a reporter.

Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Profile (full version) - Principal Joe Siino

Justin Riray
3/9/09
Jour 61 - McCune
Profile (J. Siino)
Word Count: 770



Incredible Principal gives his all for Students
[Joseph Siino]


(full profile)

Ever wonder what it would be like to donate your heart and brain … to thousands of kids? The principal of a prekindergarten to 8th grade Catholic school, Joe Siino, of Pittsburg, Calif., has been doing that for a living for over 25 years.

St. Peter Martyr School used to sit between a rundown, weed-filled back lot and a not-so-flattering Pacific Gas and Energy plant. Today, it is surrounded by beautiful houses, a wonderful city park, and a newly renovated downtown area.

Students that attend SPM go through an even sweeter transformation thanks to the very knowledgeable and caring school faculty, led by Siino.

“I always enjoyed teaching and often volunteered in any opportunity I had through college coaching and tutoring students individually and in small groups,” Siino said. He earned a B.S. Degree in Business Administration and Economics at St. Mary’s College but, shortly after, changed direction. “After graduation from college I worked briefly with a consulting firm on a part time basis and did substitute teaching in the local public school districts to help pay bills.” He enjoyed teaching so much he pursued his teaching credential and only two years after receiving it, became the vice principal of SPM!

His friends and family were not surprised as his new choice of career, though they did feel that he would have made more money if he were to stay with business. “My family was always supportive. My dad died while I was in high school and my mom raised all of her six children to follow our goals and to be independent.”

Despite his family hardship, Siino continued to make them proud; just five years after teaching he became the school principal at the young age of 28. Since then, he has also received the Mother Seton Award, an honor bestowed by the Oakland Diocese to someone who has made a significant difference through service.

His favorite parts of the job is working with students and watching their educational development, planning and implementing instructional curriculum with his fellow teachers, and meeting and working with the school families.

“Just recently I had a parent tell me how much their child enjoys coming to school and complimenting the atmosphere of the school. It is inspiring to see many of our alumni choosing to bring their children to our school.” Siino says it is very memorable when people tell him that he played a part in helping them become a better person.

He is the epitome of a teacher, Christian leader, and friend. His perfect mix of professionalism and kind-hearted disposition makes him the perfect school principal. SPM 2002 Alumnus, Justin Reynoso remembers, “He taught with his opinion--his heart. He taught in a way that helped us understand what the book was trying to convey.”

I always used to ask Mr. Siino how he kept the name of every single student and their parents, and no matter how busy he was he always had time to listen and talk to any student no matter how important. “He had the characteristics of a model principal; we all respected him,” said Reynoso. Out of all the principals I’ve ever known, Mr. Siino is the only one that I have never heard anyone say anything bad about.

Siino also knows the meaning of hard work. “I try to meet my difficulties head on and with honesty. If I need to get things done I have never been afraid to put in long hours. If I need advice I consult with peers. I also accept that not every problem has a quick fix.”

It is rough trying to balance budgets, collecting tuition, plan and carry out fundraisers, all while teaching; and it is a known fact that a grade school principal’s salary does not come close to the amount of work they put in or the difference they make in a community. “I grew up very simply and never really felt the need to have an excessive amount of things or money. I have always thankful for a job and health benefits.”

The best piece of advice he had ever received was, “ … trust in myself and live each day to the fullest.” He has helped thousands of people, including myself, adopt this principle into their own lives.

Always the same, lovable principal, Siino tells students to take advantage of all the knowledge and wisdom available and to learn and respect life. “Learning does not end at college. Hopefully, it inspires you to be a lifelong learner.” It’s funny how the man who offers this advice is not only a lifelong learner, but a lifelong teacher as well.


-Justin Riray

Profile - Principal Joe Siino

Incredible Principal gives his all for Students
[Joseph Siino]


(shortened profile)

Ever wonder what it would be like to donate your heart and brain … to thousands of kids? The principal of a K-8 Catholic school, Joe Siino, of Pittsburg, Calif., has been doing that for a living for over 25 years.

Students that attend St. Peter Martyr School experience an amazing education thanks to the very knowledgeable and caring school faculty, led by Siino.

“I always enjoyed teaching and often volunteered in any opportunity I had through college coaching and tutoring students individually and in small groups,” Siino said. He earned a B.S. Degree in Business Administration and Economics at St. Mary’s College but, shortly after, changed direction. “After graduation from college I worked briefly with a consulting firm on a part time basis and did substitute teaching in the local public school districts to help pay bills.” Within two years he became the vice principal of SPM!

“My dad died while I was in high school and my mom raised all of her six children to follow our goals and to be independent.” But, despite his family hardship, Siino continued to make them proud; just five years after teaching he became the school principal at the young age of 28. Since then, he has also received the Mother Seton Award, an honor bestowed by the Oakland Diocese to someone who has made a significant difference through service.

His favorite parts of the job is working with students and watching their educational development, planning and implementing instructional curriculum with his fellow teachers, and meeting and working with families.

“Just recently I had a parent tell me how much their child enjoys coming to school and complimenting the atmosphere of the school. It is inspiring to see many of our alumni choosing to bring their children to our school.”

His perfect mix of professionalism and kind-hearted disposition makes him the perfect school principal. SPM 2002 Alumnus, Justin Reynoso remembers, “He taught with his opinion--his heart. He taught in a way that helped us understand what the book was trying to convey.” Out of all the principals I’ve ever known, Mr. Siino is the only one that I have never heard anyone say anything bad about. “He had the characteristics of a model principal; we all respected him.”

Siino also knows the meaning of hard work. “I try to meet my difficulties head on and with honesty. If I need to get things done I have never been afraid to put in long hours.”

The best piece of advice he had ever received was, “ … trust in myself and live each day to the fullest.” He has helped thousands of people, including myself, adopt this principle into their own lives.

Always the same, lovable principal, Siino teaches students to take advantage of all the knowledge and wisdom available and to learn and respect life. “Learning does not end at college. Hopefully, it inspires you to be a lifelong learner.” It’s funny how the man who offers this advice is not only a lifelong learner, but a lifelong teacher as well.


-Justin Riray

Friday, March 6, 2009

Revised - AP Stylebook Exercise S-Z

Justin Riray

JOUR 61 – AP Style Exercise (S-Z)
20 errors / 20 points


1) He thought of Smokey Bear every time he got near a smoldering fire or entered a smoky room. (3)

2) The forecast is for lower temperatures, falling to the low 30s by tonight. If the rain continues, as expected, there could be a traveler’s advisory. (3)

3) To celebrate Veterans Day, the anniversary of the armistice that ended World War I, troops of former soldiers will march down Main Street carrying U.S. flags. (3)

4) His weeklong ordeal will be finished when finals week is over. Until then, his well-being is in doubt. (2)

5) A 19-year-old man was arrested Monday for carrying a handgun without a permit. After being released on bond, he disappeared. His whereabouts is unknown. (4)

6) She’d hoped to be able to trade in her car after getting a tuneup, but she totaled it last night. (3)

7) Could you photocopy that invoice for me? I need it for our year-end budget. (2)

Revised - Math for Journalists

1.

You would be surprised that some schools make five percent of their budget from student tuition. This local college said that two-thirds of its total budget of $120 million comes from the state. Only 28% comes from grants or donations.



2.

Average sentence for people convicted for aggravated assault in San Jose in one month in 2006: Just over a year in prison and 13 months of probation.

Median: One year in prison and two years of probation.

The median figure is more accurate in this situation because the highest number is more than five times the other sentences. The number is so far out from the group of other figures that it would be ridiculous to present the mean as “the average.” The median, in this case, is a more truthful representation of the average jail sentence.



3.

California sales tax: 8.25%

People who spend $5 on fast-food, weekly, would save:
$5 x 0.0825 x 52 = $21.45

People who spend $20 on food, weekly, would save:
$21.45 x 4 = $85.80

Thursday, March 5, 2009

Copy Edit the World #2

This one is from Cases in Communication Law by Zelezny. "Hays" is actually supposed to be "Hayes."




This is from Mass Media Law, by Pember. "Nonconfidential" should be "Non-confidential," according to the AP style book.





The bottom of the 1st picture and the top of the second picture: "Names not commonly before the public not should not be reduced to acronyms solely to save a few words."
It should say "Names not commonly known before the public..."




On Prof. McCune’s blog Mike commented:

“Just passing by.Btw, you website have great content!”

The main correction is to change “you website have great content” to “your website has great content”

If you want to be picky, there needs to be a space between “by.” and “Btw”

And if you want to be even more picky, spell btw out as “by the way,” but this is a casual comment on the internet, so “btw” seems acceptable.